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'greatly influenced'; Statement of Purpose, Graphic Design MFA

3 - Gloria, Thank you for your advice. As a student I remember having a problem with over using commas,...

Graduaterwalker - Nov 23, 2008rwalker - Nov 23, 2008
"the cops around my block" - uc prompt 1

4 - hey, i dunno if this could play a crucial role or not but the prompt is actually: Describe the...

Undergraduatevanvan513 - Nov 22, 2008nunya415 - Nov 23, 2008
'the only other Indian-American' - Common App Admission

4 - Thanks for clarifying; it helps. I think the piece flows very well. It is nicely organized, uses smooth...

Undergraduateupstateny15 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
How do I start my research paper on anti-censorship?

2 - Good afternoon :) I suggest beginning with an outline. List all of the topics you absolutely want to...

Research Paperslillypop215 - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
Mechanics a Great Experience

2 - Good afternoon :) Avoid beginning your sentences with conjunctive/transitory words such as "so," "but," or "and." In...

Undergraduatejrod91 - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
"I have volunteered at our neighborhood's public library" - UC prompt 1

2 - Good afternoon :) Make sure that you don't begin your sentences with conjunctive/transitory words such as "but," "so,"...

Undergraduategora2867 - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
'academic strenght and research opportunities' Why decide to apply - emory supplement

2 - Good afternoon :) I think this is a great response to the prompt. You explain very well why...

Undergraduatevolleyball09 - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
SAIC design statement of purpose; 'As long as there is life, there will be art'

7 - Good afternoon :) You're on the right track; much improved from the last couple of times. Continue to...

Undergraduateadelewu - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
"the day I first came to America" - admission essay

2 - Good afternoon :) First, some mechanical suggestions. Make sure you are capitalizing only the first words of sentences...

Undergraduateskjw25 - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
'traffic jam, noisy neighborhood' - New movie theater may be built

3 - Good afternoon :) "Going to movie theater is a hobby for many people; therefore, the number of movie...

Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
"I was the only Latin American student," common app- significant experience

NEW - hi i will like some comment and help with his essay it says min 250 words and i have...

Undergraduateestefa227 - Nov 23, 2008 -
"What Men Live by?" - Leo Tolstoy once asked this question in one of his famous novels

4 - Thank you so much!!! by the way are you still working at this late night?.. I feel bad..:( ...

Undergraduateskjw25 - Nov 22, 2008skjw25 - Nov 23, 2008
Resilience and Confucian proverb

3 - Good evening :) OK, let's see. How about, "When I was six, I curiously pressed a key on...

Undergraduaterainyxoxo - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
'volunteering at local schools' - UC prompt#2 - Helping people

2 - Good evening :) I think you've got really good content here; you describe what experience/event you are proud...

Undergraduatemember123 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
'one cannot do everything, one can do something' - UT Austin- issue of importance

2 - Good evening :) This is a wonderful essay! I only have a couple of suggestions: "...in 9th...

UndergraduateJamandaJuice - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
How to properly place the quotation which is referring to Enderun?

2 - Good evening :) You should consult your required citation style for final formatting questions, but I believe the...

Grammar, Usageeng1 - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
"Linked to my grandfather's presence" -UC prompt 1

2 - I think this is a great piece, especially that first paragraph. You acknowledge and answer every facet of the...

Undergraduatesurfsandiego - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
"The person, my grandpa" - UC prompt #2

2 - Good evening :) Since you didn't explain what type of assistance you were seeking, I have made some...

Undergraduatelyndn21 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
"I think Florida State is perfect" - FSU essay

2 - I think your content is a great answer to the prompt. You take each character trait and evaluate and...

Undergraduatealexanderstodda - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
Writing an essay on "the iron men" by farley mowat

2 - Good evening :) Congratulations on going back to school! It will be a wonderful experience. First off, to...

Essayskrissygirl - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
"There is one who leads and there is one who follows." - admission essay

4 - I'm sorry, I'm not familiar with the university or their admissions procedures and requirements. Can you post the prompt...

Undergraduatektjhmj - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
I have already previewed life at Penn State and absolutely loved it - summer experience

4 - I think once you've done the mechanical/grammatical polishing, it will be a great piece. Take a deep breath and...

Undergraduateeleankel - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
"I had to reach the finish line." - Help with Prompt 2

2 - Good evening :) I think you've got a good start here, but the focus is in the wrong...

Undergraduatelilibeth91760 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
questions on UC personal statement

2 - Good evening :) I think that answering an essay prompt with a complete sentence to begin with is...

Undergraduateskjw25 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
Biology Creative Essay

2 - Good evening :) What can we help you with here? What kind of assistance are you seeking? ...

Writing Feedbackmonee2 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
Gastronomy is much more than just a hobby for me - extracurricular mini-essay

4 - Good afternoon :) As I stated before, watch what you start your sentences off with. Avoid beginning your...

Undergraduatemichel92 - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
"our district championship" - Common App Elaboration--150 words.

2 - Good afternoon :) This is a very good short response. The only thing I can see is to...

Undergraduatebhangra369 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
help with essay #1: experience with soup kitchen

4 - Since you asked for corrections, that was all I provided in the first posting :) I think it...

Writing Feedbackdatanator - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
My Undergraduate essay to FSU

2 - Good afternoon :) I think your content answers the prompt well, and it is organized, but there are...

Undergraduatelivefromthe850 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
Why Energy Engineering? - Will you review my admission essay

2 - Good morning :) As you didn't include the prompt/assignment for this piece, I have edited the first section...

Undergraduateawaazdev - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
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