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Paper about ISA. My teacher said my paper is unorganized.

2 - The main thing about organization is that each subject you want to talk about should have its own paragraph....

Writing Feedbacksadie0910 - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
Essay about bad effects of the internet on students

2 - Good afternoon :) In regards to meaning, there is no difference between "internet" and "the internet." "The" is...

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I need strategies in writing an analogy

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Grammar, Usagetanty - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
A successful college campus - Lehigh Second Supplement

2 - I think this is a great response. You answer all facets of the prompt thoroughly, and your example is...

Undergraduatevaibhav2614 - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
For UC transfer essay, some questions.

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Undergraduategalz - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
to expand my knowledge - FSU essay, opinions and suggestions on improvement

2 - You have a very good essay here; a few structural/mechanical suggestions, but you answer the prompt effectively. You discuss...

Undergraduatelps227 - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
What is Conrad's definition of evil from heart of darkness and the strange

NEW - What is conrad's defintion of evil from heart of darkness and The Strange Case Of Dr. Jekyll and Mr....

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Realism Essay - the readers choice

NEW - Had to write an essay on realism/romatacism. Please give any grammer corrections and content suggestions you may have. ...

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Master in Advertising - my true passion and my hard-working spirit is strong enough

NEW - I am very grateful for your help on my essay - regarding structure, grammar and spelling etc. Requirement:...

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"Mi casa es tu casa" - Common Application- Personal Statement

3 - Good evening :) I think you have done a fantastic job answering this prompt. You have described the...

Undergraduatejdsams02 - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
Family, qualities - UCF Admissions Essay: #2 + #4

NEW - 2. How has your family history, culture or environment influenced who you are? For Centuries, America has been...

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Teenagers and alcohol essay - help revise or offer suggestions:

2 - Good evening :) First, avoid contractions in formal academic writing; for instance, "It's" should be "It is." ...

Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
"to even graduate" - PROMPT #2 PERSONAL STATEMENT

NEW - I am the first person in my family to even graduate from high school; when my father was not...

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"The alphabet I know consists of only seven letters." -UC statement pr 2

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Undergraduatecuecomeber - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
International student to apply Tesol - Statement of Purpose

2 - I'm not really sure about the content of your essay. Have you been to college already and majored in...

UndergraduateMinJung - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
UCF essay about family dinner

2 - Good afternoon :) I have edited the first section and then made some more general comments in regards...

Undergraduatefruban - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
"Playing with my Yoshi doll and making new friends" - UC Prompt #1

6 - In regards to content, I'm not sure really where you are going with it. In the introduction you talk...

UndergraduateXegonyv - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
UC Prompt 1, My life at a boarding school

6 - Good afternoon :) Thank you for clearing that up; if I made that error, it is probable that...

Undergraduatethagg - Nov 17, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
Cause and Effect Essay-A Family of Poverty

5 - Don't tell the reader, that you're going to tell him something. Like, " I will describe what my poverty...

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The Freedom to Choose Death

NEW - The Freedom to Choose Death Euthanasia has become one of the most controversial topics nowadays. Euthanasia means "mercy...

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Pls. help revise essay: The person who has great influence on me

3 - thanks for your help, Gloria. tony...

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"trying for the best university in the world" - Uc Prompt #2

3 - thanks a million:)...

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FU Essay - Significant experience/Achievement - Revisions Needed

3 - Thanks for the input....

Undergraduateahhitsj0e - Nov 18, 2008ahhitsj0e - Nov 18, 2008
'Growing up I hated to read' - Fashion Institute of Technology essay

2 - Good evening :) In regards to flow, there are a few things that you can make sure of...

Undergraduatesunsetswitheli - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 18, 2008
Taking action against moral injustice - English Essay Gr. 12 Level

3 - You're very welcome. This is a very importance stance, and this sentence needs to be included somewhere in...

Writing FeedbackGeist - Nov 17, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 18, 2008
Study abroad program in Nicaragu - Uc Prompt #2. Need Complete Revision

2 - First, make sure your words and sentences aren't redundant. For example, "I started thinking about how I felt before...

Undergraduateveesualize - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 18, 2008
"DARPA Grand Challenge" - Lehigh Short Essay

2 - Good evening :) I won't ever "tear you down." :) Constructive criticism, now, that's my forte :) ...

Undergraduatevaibhav2614 - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 18, 2008
"the happy and healthy world" -UC essays #1 and #2

2 - Good afternoon :) In regards to the first piece, as long as it fits the word count requirement,...

UndergraduateAsapirs23 - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 18, 2008
"I can never know everything, but with what I know, I can accomplish anything" - essay check

2 - Good evening :) I have provided some general comments in regards to mechanics in this piece. First,...

Undergraduatepinks1026 - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 18, 2008
comparing essay: Machiavelli & Sheikh Mohamad Bin Rashid

4 - Good afternoon :) That is where your brainstorming comes in; the "hard work" of the assignment. Try brainstorming...

Essayssara - Nov 17, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 18, 2008
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