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how does Penn make a perfect match for you?

4 - I don't think so; you've done a very thorough job as it is. I think you've covered all of...

Undergraduategbtl - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
Name a professor with whom you would like to study or conduct research with

5 - Good evening. Let's see... I suggest taking out some of the ex tenuous detail and condensing your...

Undergraduategbtl - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
Obstacles or 'bumps in the road in your academic or personal life

4 - Sure! "...and I'm confident that..." "...economical crisis don't help..." "...center and I've noticed..." I...

Undergraduatefernaj13 - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
teleporting mentally to a different world

4 - That would work as well. Generally, whatever tense is more natural and comes easier to you will reflect itself...

Undergraduatemickeygirl - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
FSU admissions essay- worthy enough to attend Florida State University?

4 - Good evening. Opening with a question here is fine; you kind of just have to take the tone...

Undergraduatebethany_shphrd - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
"I am well prepared and primed" - FSU essay

3 - I like the new addition. I suggest changing the middle of the first sentence to be a little less...

Undergraduatecnwilliams - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
essay about myself, when/where I was born, my study, hobbies, etc.

2 - "...I am the baggiest one." What does "baggiest" describe here? Do you mean biggest? I'm not sure... :) ...

Writing Feedbackcrawling - Oct 17, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
Cigarretes has been banned from public environment. Agree or Disagree?

NEW - Essay topic: Cigarretes has been banned from public environment. Agree or Disagree?? Around the world people are concerned...

Writing Feedbackvipao - Oct 17, 2008 -
this paper significantly transformed me - pls edit this common app essay

2 - "...freshman ..." "...editor-in-chief ..." In regards to content, you are very concise and organized. Your piece is...

Undergraduateds816 - Oct 17, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
How to safe the Earth + Personal reflection of my presentation - Essays

4 - Good afternoon. From your posting, it seems that this prompt requests specific information from specific material that you...

Writing Feedbackssdd - Nov 28, 2007EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
how has your family influenced who you are? UCF admission essay

NEW - Please, tell me all i'm doing wrong in my paper. I have to submit my application for xfer today....

Undergraduatefernaj13 - Oct 17, 2008 -
my summer trip to Trinidad & Tobago - UF Essay Evaluation

2 - Good morning. Please note your other posting for mechanical and grammatical suggestions, as they still apply to this...

Undergraduateking723 - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
Take advantage of every moment ; Colombia Essay/ Rutgers

NEW - Take advantage of every moment is what my older sister would always tell me. When I was 14 years...

Writing Feedbackcynthia180 - Oct 17, 2008 -
Need advice on essay question- "Unique characteristics and experiences"

3 - Hey, thanks alot. I think you are doing a great job on this boarding helping everyone out. I think...

UndergraduateGuruKid - Oct 15, 2008GuruKid - Oct 17, 2008
"I have played piano" - Chopin's Second Ballade

6 - Thanks!...

Undergraduatepianolegend91 - Oct 9, 2008pianolegend91 - Oct 16, 2008
UF Essay - "Ready for My Unpredictable Future"

4 - And... I want to delete this thread. How do I do that? I am going to post up another...

Undergraduateesthie_ - Oct 14, 2008esthie_ - Oct 16, 2008
GED Practice: Discuss the influence of rock music on young people

2 - "Because rock music is good entertainment for everyone, especially young people, it influences good physical condition, improvement of exercise...

Undergraduatefisherman - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
Essay for Fellowship-INFORMATION TECHNOLOGY MANAGEMENT

5 - Good afternoon. This is a very good start. You've done a great job explaining "the role of family...

Graduatefara - Oct 7, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
CORNELL COMMON APP ESSAY; To feel desired is a primary biological need in life

2 - Good afternoon. My only suggestion is to make sure you are only capitalizing proper nouns and the first...

Undergraduateakhan11 - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
What experiences have led you to select your professional field?

2 - "Zip, zap, zoom! " went my..." "...does my Play Station give way every..." I suggest wrapping the...

Writing Feedbackkimaya - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
"struggling to comprehend my nemesis" - a significant experience

2 - Good afternoon. This is an excellent essay! Mechanically and grammatically clean, organized, fluid, with a great story for...

Undergraduatecaliforniagirl - Oct 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
An unexpected act of kindness

4 - Good afternoon. Putting this piece at the beginning would be a great idea; it's a "hook" and sets...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
Is there any error in this phrase?

8 - Good afternoon. Grammatically, as it is this statement is a fragment. I suggest: Obtaining an MBA will...

Grammar, Usagesaikarvn - Feb 9, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
'true inner being' - MY UF admission essay

2 - Good afternoon. One mechanical suggestion: "...including soccer, which I had never played before. By my senior...

UndergraduateHelena - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
Three Hovering Doormen--Four sonnets forming one poem

2 - Good afternoon. OK, let's start at the top. A sonnet is a poem of fourteen lines, traditionally speaking....

PoetrySimone - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
"I manage all of this", I would love to be a part of this place - FSU Essay - critique and ideas...

2 - "...say I have not, nor plan to, give in when these times occur." "...problems, and depend only on...

Undergraduatemoochykk33 - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
'My determined and independent grandfather' - person who had a significant influence

2 - Good afternoon. Just a couple of suggestions. First, "Grandfather" should not be capitalized, unless it is the first...

Undergraduatelist00 - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
"I am a fencer." -Common App essay: is it any good?

4 - You could add more analysis on how deeply these skills have effected you a bit more; other than that,...

Undergraduatelexlavender - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
Land for human's purpose or left in its natural conditions ?

NEW - In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural conditions or is there...

Writing Feedbacknezzaru - Oct 16, 2008 -
Essay: "There's no place like home."

3 - Thanks a lot Gloria!...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008learningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008
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