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"I am a fencer." -Common App essay: is it any good?

4 - You could add more analysis on how deeply these skills have effected you a bit more; other than that,...

Undergraduatelexlavender - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
Land for human's purpose or left in its natural conditions ?

NEW - In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural conditions or is there...

Writing Feedbacknezzaru - Oct 16, 2008 -
Essay: "There's no place like home."

3 - Thanks a lot Gloria!...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008learningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008
'the beauty of mathematics' - California exchange student

4 - Thank you very much for your suggestions!~...

Undergraduatemickeygirl - Oct 15, 2008mickeygirl - Oct 15, 2008
FSU Resume; 'letterman on my high school football team'

4 - Thanks both. that helped alot...

LettersSportjag - Oct 15, 2008Sportjag - Oct 15, 2008
Creativity is one of the highly concerned points to those aspired people

3 - Thank you very much! I will try my best to avoid these usage errors in my later essays!...

Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 13, 2008helenalqy - Oct 15, 2008
Doctor of Pharmacy Degree in less than three years; Why University of the Pacific?

2 - Why is this program better than all of the others? What is it specifically about this institution that is...

Undergraduatewendywu - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 15, 2008
The Act of Revenge, The Cask of Amontillado Essay

4 - Good afternoon. "In pace requiescat!" (1) Is correct. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...

Writing FeedbackBradlays - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 15, 2008
'Teachers and student relations' - Common App - elaborate on one of your activity

2 - Good afternoon. In regards to flow, at the end of the first section you could put in a...

Undergraduategbtl - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 15, 2008
Super Powers Hero - FSU Essay

NEW - "Vires represents strength in its many forms. Whether it is physical, emotional, or intellectual, it is something that can...

UndergraduateLimaEm - Oct 15, 2008 -
The National Merit Scholarship Essay - UF Essay Help

7 - Congratulations on National Merit. Oddly enough, I just applied to National Merit and I'm writing my UF letter...

ScholarshipAlbo - Oct 12, 2008Liist - Oct 14, 2008
Motivations of buying a product - Toefl Essay

3 - Thanks Gloria! Your comments are really helpful. Regards, Prakash...

Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 13, 2008toefl_guy - Oct 14, 2008
"my strong moral and intellectual ability" - Last Minute Essay. (FSU)

NEW - Throughout my entire life the Latin word Vires has been my guiding philosophy. Vires embodies my moral and intellectual...

UndergraduateAnthony - Oct 14, 2008 -
(techniques that Schlosser) FAST FOOD NATION ESSAY

4 - Ethos,logos, pathos are the three writing styles that everyone needs to know to be a more effective writer and...

Book Reportstaeb1n - Oct 10, 2008taeb1n - Oct 14, 2008
Should we celebrate Halloween? - essay help

NEW - Should we celebrate Halloween? Halloween has become the second most anticipated holiday for children after Christmas and Chanukah....

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'difficulty learning' - UCF ESSAY - BUMPS IN THE ROAD

2 - Good evening. You've got a fine piece here, but I'm not sure how it fulfills the prompt. The...

Undergraduatelecokr - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
Essay on the short story "Rock Springs" by Richard Ford

2 - Good afternoon. In regards to spelling, I suggest you run the piece through a program with a spell...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
COMMON APP - the importance of diversity to you

3 - Good evening. Your response does answer the prompt, with well thought out examples and good description. It flows...

Undergraduatecalend4r - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
I am passionate about each activity which I am apart of - Elaborate on one of your activities...

2 - Good afternoon. I am not involved in every club, b ut I am passionate about each ... As...

Undergraduatebeingryanjude - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
'Better grades' - Common Application - Significant Achievement

3 - I agree with calend4r's comments about the last paragraph; it is important to make sure that you are relating...

Undergraduategbtl - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
Impacts of Senior Citizens in their Choices for Healthcare - essay edit

2 - Good afternoon. As the prompt and/or requirements for this piece were not included in the posting, I can...

Writing Feedbackkcbisslessi - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
A WONDERFUL CAREER - 'I am ready for my interview'

4 - Good evening. There are some main things I am concerned about in this essay. For instance, with the...

Writing Feedbackbadgrammer - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
Observation paper for HRT 101 Benson

4 - Good afternoon. As I have previously commented, check for capitalization. Things that are not proper nouns (specific ...

Writing Feedbackbensonm - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
'I have no body, I'm stuck' - Why do you want to attend Pratt?

3 - I agree that the pieces definitely need more expansion. "Intro I have been interested in all sorts of arts...

Undergraduatekobedatnext - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
Lost And Found - Narrative Essay

3 - Thank you very much!!!! My teacher said if I had any Misplaced commas. My grade would be automatic D....

Writing Feedbackeeyore_lover29 - Oct 13, 2008eeyore_lover29 - Oct 14, 2008
'giving up my time to help my uncle' - personal statement

NEW - TELL US A PERSONAL QUALITY,TALENT,ACCOMPLISHMENT, CONTRIBUTION OR EXPERIENCE THAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU. WHAT ABOUT THSI QUALITY OR ACCOMPLISHMENT...

Undergraduatenickymicky - Oct 14, 2008 -
"Zoo Rejection" - my essay

3 - Thanks for your help, Gloria....

Writing FeedbackTabor - Oct 12, 2008Tabor - Oct 13, 2008
About my youth and my first visit to the USA - some suggestion pls

NEW - Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how...

Undergraduateawakenlion - Oct 13, 2008 -
a multitude of unforgettable memories - common application essay

NEW - Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on...

Undergraduatethebobert - Oct 13, 2008 -
They that wait upon the Lord shall renew their streng - FSU essay help

4 - Yes; elaboration and specifics will save these essays, because as they are here they are still a bit vague....

UndergraduateCydiona - Oct 12, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 13, 2008
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