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Speech-language pathology - essay opinion needed

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Graduateamandahp - Sep 30, 2007amandahp - Oct 2, 2007
Book Review Project: "Wilco: Learning How To Die"

4 - Greetings! I think you have done a splendid job! I understand what you mean about writing about the...

Book Reportssilverystars - Sep 28, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
The Otaku - Explaining with examples essay

5 - Greetings! I would guess that "cosplay" is short for "costume play"? If so, you could say: He regularly...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Sep 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
COMPUTERS, the most intriguing and complicated things in the world

2 - Greetings! I think you've done a great job with your essay! I have just a few editing suggestions:...

Undergraduatehabtdemis - Oct 1, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
I NEED AN OPENING STATEMENT on essay: challenging fate

3 - Thank you Sarah. The idea that "our fate cannot be changed and what happens when we try to change...

EssaysSMontes10 - Sep 28, 2007SMontes10 - Oct 1, 2007
Impact Essay (significant experience, achievement, risk)

2 - Greetings! Annoying? No way! That's why we're here! Your excellent essay needs very little work; just a few...

Scholarshipbizkitgirlzc - Sep 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
Sports Memorabilia: Ebay VS. Field Of Dreams

NEW - Sports Memorabilia: Ebay VS. Field Of Dreams Sports: Fun to watch, exciting, and most of all competitive. These...

Writing FeedbackCNKPRODUCTIONS - Sep 30, 2007 -
I like to see super heroes as a mock to society; Superhero Essay

2 - Greetings! You've given your response to the question an interesting twist--very good! There is little I would...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Sep 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 30, 2007
Chilean /Steady Grades; Personal life&Aspirations - Biography(SCHOLARSHIP)

2 - Greetings! You've written an excellent essay! I have just a few editing suggestions: "Study my girl, or...

Scholarshipbizkitgirlzc - Sep 29, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 30, 2007
FSU App. essay: the best advice given; 'be the head and not the tail'

NEW - The topic is to basically explain the best advice given and why? Please read this and give me any...

UndergraduateJessicaTiffany - Sep 29, 2007 -
EMMA & HARRIET SMITH; AP LITERATURE- Essay on characterization

2 - Greetings! You've written a very good essay! The only thing I might suggest is adding to your quotes...

Book ReportsWonderfulloser - Sep 27, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 28, 2007
Defining Classic (Extended Definition Essay)

4 - Greetings! I think you've done a masterful job of fine-tuning your essay! And you're quite right about "it's"...

Writing Feedbacksilverystars - Sep 19, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 28, 2007
How to write a good advertising article?

2 - Greetings! With any website it's important to remember that people can't visit it if they can't find it!...

Grammar, UsageSuperplayer - Sep 26, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 27, 2007
help with graduate admission into Masters of Science and the Public

8 - Greetings! When you are working on making the sentences a little more manageable, keep in mind that it...

Graduateeplaya - Sep 18, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 26, 2007
Political value of surface and identity in a repressive society

2 - Greetings! My interpretation would be that "politics" or "political value" would mean, in this instance, the furtherance of...

Essaystntmayhem - Sep 26, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 26, 2007
Reed Essay (interest in a liberal arts and science education)

3 - Greetings! I like what you've done with the ending! Very nice! If the word limit is 500,...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Sep 24, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 25, 2007
FSU ESSAY - "Pick your favourite and meaningful quote"

2 - Greetings! Your essay is excellent, and nearly perfect. I have only a couple of small suggestions: I...

Undergraduatecarsons2k - Sep 24, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 24, 2007
Have you ever done something to make others happy? Peer Pressure Paper

5 - Hmmm. I due until Thursday, so tomorrow I'm gonna take some time before class and ask one of the...

Writing Feedbackusanchezfe - Sep 21, 2007usanchezfe - Sep 24, 2007
Thesis on How do love and forgiveness work together as a theme?

8 - OH MY GOSH!! I can't believe I didn't think of the word redemption!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! You really...

Essaystirano93 - Sep 18, 2007tirano93 - Sep 23, 2007
Consumer prices drop - Economy revisited ; expositive essay

5 - Thanks!...

Essayssamuraitom - Sep 20, 2007samuraitom - Sep 23, 2007
A scary house - descriptive essay

NEW - Prompt was to describe a place. I think I did a good job with that. I tried not...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Sep 23, 2007 -
english verb tense (simple past, present perfect, past perfect)

2 - Greetings! You've done a good job with this! You are right, some of them are very tricky and,...

Grammar, Usagecolla26 - Sep 22, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 23, 2007
Short Review - reasons for attending college

4 - Greetings! No, technically, that is not a run-on sentence. A run-on sentence is one which has two independent...

Essaysvolzurg - Sep 22, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 23, 2007
How my favorite Hobby/Pastime refelcts my personality

2 - Greetings! I think you've done an excellent job of demonstrating the characteristics you listed! The only suggestions I...

Writing Feedbackbdoan - Sep 21, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 21, 2007
A Rose for Emily : Why Did Miss Emily Kill Homer?

2 - Greetings! Faulkner's story brings up a lot of intriguing questions. In contemplating why Miss Emily may have killed...

Essaysblackscorpion15 - Sep 20, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 21, 2007
My review of the great gatsby

3 - Greetings! I think you're doing a great job so far! You do want to be careful, as Devyn...

Book Reportsjeanelle - Sep 20, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 21, 2007
The Great Gatsby-- Essay on occasions and events in the novel

3 - This is completly brilliant 1000X's better than mine im still not happy with it and am tring...

Book ReportsWonderfulloser - Sep 18, 2007jeanelle - Sep 20, 2007
15 minutes of fame; NYU COMMON APP

2 - Greetings! You've written an excellent essay! I have just a few editing suggestions. It was then I...

Undergraduatevishal720 - Sep 19, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 20, 2007
ME & My BROTHER / Human behavior psychology -Common App

2 - Greetings! I think you've written a great essay that reveals a lot about what kind of person you...

Undergraduatemodi - Sep 18, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 18, 2007
References or journals for a pys research class

2 - Greetings! Your best friend, as a student, is often your university library. As a student, you probably have...

Grammar, Usagelindbriel - Sep 18, 2007EF_Team2 - Sep 18, 2007
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