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The Business Analytics Program - Why is MSBA program the next logical step for you?

2 - The information you have presented for your application is strong in terms of content but tends to be bogged...

Graduateajain2007 - Jan 13, 2025Holt - Jan 14, 2025
Gap in progression Common App prompt (250 words)

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback! Besides that, is the content fine?...

Writing Feedbacktrippletrouble12 - Jan 13, 2025trippletrouble12 - Jan 13, 2025
Paraguay - Global Markets and Local Creativities

2 - Your credentials are very strong. The fact that you have work experience with Erasmus Mundus definitely adds a significant...

Scholarshipadrianaman - Jan 10, 2025Holt - Jan 12, 2025
Little Oceans - UWC essay

2 - Reviewers actually prefer that the applicants write from a point of view that shows a personal insight. So writing...

ScholarshipHarryweg - Jan 10, 2025Holt - Jan 12, 2025
Social, environmental, and economic changes - Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - Your passion and motivation should be one that encourages you to think outside of the box. Rather than relying...

Scholarshiprimbi8 - Jan 10, 2025Holt - Jan 12, 2025
Common App Essay about Life Challenges&Backpacking

2 - Backpacking does not have anything to do with the life challenges you faced. Neither does it provide the actual...

Undergraduatewcherau25 - Jan 9, 2025Holt - Jan 10, 2025
Avid Evil - UWC application

3 - I couldn't work out the diversity angle but how about this Essay : At summer camp, I was...

ScholarshipObed199 - Jan 9, 2025Obed199 - Jan 10, 2025
Determination and effort - Personal Statement Essay/ GKS-U scholarship

2 - The instructions for writing this essay indicate that you must use either full Hangul or full English for...

UndergraduateGadhalag - Jan 9, 2025Holt - Jan 10, 2025
The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008.

2 - Refrain from mentioning the position of the image on the page. It is advisable not to do so because...

Writing Feedbackminhtannguyen - Jan 9, 2025Holt - Jan 10, 2025
a motivation letter for applying master degree at university being a data analyst

2 - The information provided in the motivation letter is not as strong as it could be. It is in fact,...

Lettersdsuf - Jan 8, 2025Holt - Jan 9, 2025
My Family - What is important to you? And why? UBC Application

2 - Your response is unique in the sense that the importance of family to you is based upon a tragedy,...

UndergraduateHunchie - Jan 7, 2025Holt - Jan 7, 2025
airfare reducing, good or not?

2 - There is no way that air fare prices are on the wane. This statement implies that the prices...

Writing Feedbackgottogoya - Jan 7, 2025Holt - Jan 7, 2025
A model of a city - Waterloo Computer Science Application - Question #3

2 - I guess one of the major questions that the reviewer will ask himself after reading this is, "Why did...

Undergraduatedanyal_asghar21 - Jan 7, 2025Holt - Jan 7, 2025
Computer Science - applying for ODYLP: Vietnam

6 - Computer science is not an acedemic subject. It is comprised of several difference acedemic subjects, mainly math and programming....

Undergraduatejohnydong - Jan 1, 2025danyal_asghar21 - Jan 7, 2025
volunteering at a summer school - Waterloo AIF - Question #2

3 - You have written a lot of background information, however if anything, this information is being against you, especially that...

Undergraduatexers - Jan 5, 2025danyal_asghar21 - Jan 7, 2025
Whole Foods Macaron (topic) for "group and its unofficial member" (UChicago Creative Prompt)

2 - I think that the essay can be further improved by looking into what created the batter? Representative of your...

Undergraduatety101807 - Jan 5, 2025Holt - Jan 6, 2025
Motivation Letter to KTH - Real Estate and Construction Management

2 - Details regarding this competition would help to create a more informative paragraph. Provide the name of the competition,...

Lettersnganlyn5520 - Jan 5, 2025Holt - Jan 6, 2025
The Head of Technology - Waterloo Computer Science Application - Question #2

4 - @danyal_asghar21 This is a very strong paragraph which highlights how u managed a leadership role effectively. however...

Undergraduatedanyal_asghar21 - Jan 4, 2025xers - Jan 5, 2025
A passion for computers - Waterloo Engineer Application - Question #1

2 - I am not sure about how a passion for computers will translate to your possible achievements as an Electrical...

Undergraduatexers - Jan 4, 2025Holt - Jan 5, 2025
"independent-minded" - UBC Personal Profile help

2 - The essay deviated from the actual focus. The reviewer does not need to know about your family traits in...

Undergraduatesab07 - Jan 4, 2025Holt - Jan 5, 2025
Strategic business mind - GLOCAL Erasmus Mundus Application - Personal Statement

2 - Kindly name the NGO that you worked with and also, a few of the brands that you assisted with....

Scholarshiptahsinjalal - Jan 4, 2025Holt - Jan 5, 2025
PlayTouchless Project - UBC Admission - Important Activity

2 - The requirement is for an activity that you have listed in the previous section of the requirements. I am...

Undergraduateayred_99 - Jan 3, 2025Holt - Jan 3, 2025
Statement of Purpose for the GLOBAL MINDS Erasmus Mundus scholarship in Social and Cultural Psy

3 - Thank you very much for your feedback. You have no idea how much it means to me. I...

ScholarshipPsychwizard - Jan 2, 2025Psychwizard - Jan 3, 2025
Essay on The Role of Renewable Energy in Climate Change

2 - The research paper contains relevant and up to date information. It is informative for the most part and does...

Research PapersJeremiah17 - Jan 2, 2025Holt - Jan 3, 2025
Design and structure - Motivation Letter - Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - The information contained in the essay is not really geared towards a motivation letter. This is more of a...

Letterssafiraes - Jan 2, 2025Holt - Jan 3, 2025
Some people say the fashion industry has a bad effect on people's lives. Do you agree?(IELTS WRITING

2 - Please be mindful of the word count for the task 2 essay. The minimum requirement for a passing score...

Writing Feedbacknanaaa6 - Jan 2, 2025Holt - Jan 3, 2025
Captivated by numbers - ERASMUS MUNDUS SCHOLARSHIP LETTER OF MOTIVATION

2 - While it is admirable that your father was your role model when it came to the development of your...

LettersOsatoOsazuwa - Jan 1, 2025Holt - Jan 2, 2025
motivation letter for master of science by a data analyst with mechatronic bachelor degree

2 - You developed a personal statement rather than a motivational letter. The content of this paper are only an expanded...

LettersKyaw Aung - Jan 1, 2025Holt - Jan 2, 2025
Some people say that it's better to work from home than work in an office. Do you agree or disagree?

2 - The first problem with this task 2 piece is that it is under the word count minimum of 250....

Writing FeedbackKingnevergiveup - Jan 1, 2025Holt - Jan 2, 2025
short fuse guy - ubc personal profile. who i am what/im proud of/how would people describe me

3 - It would be better if you could extend and clarify the character development to make a better profile...

Undergraduateghosthunter81734 - Dec 31, 2024Edukid2309 - Jan 2, 2025
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