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Draft of research paper/persuasive essay on how to define success as a foster youth

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"Write Down Your Key Achievements"- GIST undergraduate admission. If possible, kindly help me out.

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UndergraduateShakerin Aakash - Mar 7, 2021Holt - Mar 8, 2021
Aerospace engineer - concept, theory, or topic you have explored

2 - You failed to respond to the prompt in totality. You need to discuss your intellectual curiosity first, then why...

ScholarshipLavanyaD17 - Mar 7, 2021Holt - Mar 8, 2021
It is argued that people should take meat out of food list and become vegetarians. Do you agree?

2 - If you notice, in the original discussion, there is no argument being presented. Only an idea is being represented...

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The idea of hosting an international sports events has brought several controversies. Pros and cons.

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using intelligent robots

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Igcse English as a second language (0511) article writing

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Writing FeedbackBilal786 - Mar 7, 2021Holt - Mar 8, 2021
"Many people think there is an increase of antisocial behavior and a lack of respect to others."

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Writing Feedbackanhtran98 - Mar 7, 2021Holt - Mar 8, 2021
GKS-G Personal Statement - Creative Economy Diplomacy

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Scholarshipayo_yuk - Mar 6, 2021ayo_yuk - Mar 7, 2021
Learning languages - my study plan. STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR KOREAN SCHOLARSHIP

3 - @lynleo Hi, yeah I think the comittee wanted to see how strong-willed we are in applying for the scholarship,...

Scholarshiplynleo - Mar 6, 2021karinrizky - Mar 7, 2021
The number of students who are interested in education

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Task 2 pros and cons: ocean creatures relocated in amusement parks

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IELTS2 Some people believe that the best way to stay fit and healthy is simply to lead a normal life

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TEM AND SEM ANALYSIS IN TITANIUM DIOIXDE NANOTUBE AND GRAPHENE OXIDE COMPOSITE

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Writing Feedbackmiigky990903 - Mar 6, 2021Holt - Mar 7, 2021
In some countries, men and women are having children late in life. Indicate the causes and effects.

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Writing Feedbacknguyenvietanh26 - Mar 6, 2021Holt - Mar 7, 2021
IELTS writing task 2 Advertisements are extremely successful at persuading people to buy things

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How to write an analysis of the poem?

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PoetryBrightColii - May 9, 2012Holt - Mar 6, 2021
(Task 2)Topic: Technology is being used to monitor people. Will the pros of this outweigh the cons?

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Writing Feedbackidkwhattosay - Mar 5, 2021Holt - Mar 6, 2021
Confidence and expertise - Why would you be a great participant in the Global UGRAD Program?

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Scholarshipi_m - Mar 5, 2021Holt - Mar 6, 2021
Supply Chain - Personal Statement Graduate GKS, Industrial Engineering

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Graduatekarinrizky - Mar 5, 2021Holt - Mar 6, 2021
Being resilient - Personal Statement GKS-G MBA Aspirant

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ScholarshipAlejandroHz96 - Mar 4, 2021AlejandroHz96 - Mar 5, 2021
Application for the math program of the university of Waterloo - AIF form essay

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Undergraduateremy - Feb 10, 2021Umbu Richy - Mar 5, 2021
In last 20 century the population city increases dramatically

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Writing Feedbackrozajone - Mar 4, 2021Holt - Mar 5, 2021
Social networks are gradually replacing the direct communication among many people

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Making the band the best it can be. Is my drum major essay good?

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Fascination for things that fly. Personal statement for MS in Aerospace Engineering

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GraduateAnmol Chaudhary - Mar 4, 2021Holt - Mar 5, 2021
Own glass of lemonade. A REALIZATION THAT SPARKED A PERIOD OF PERSONAL GROWTH OR NEW UNDERSTANDING

2 - You are spreading yourself too thin in this essay. You only need one period of realization. The Lemon and...

Undergraduatenklinh2308 - Mar 4, 2021Holt - Mar 5, 2021
AAS - Accountant/Auditor - plans when you finish your studies?[500 characters]

4 - i think you should categorize your plan into shorterm and longterm, better if you add information of your continuation...

ScholarshipRebu - Feb 18, 2021sucianggraini - Mar 4, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: THE DIAGRAMS SHOW THE PRESENT BUILDING OF A COLLEGE AND THE FUTURE PLAN

NEW - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 24/10/2020 The maps illustrate future transformations of a college building compared to the present...

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Australia Awards Scholarship Essay (Master of Public Policy)

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ScholarshipUmbu Richy - Mar 4, 2021Umbu Richy - Mar 4, 2021
Describe a graph about the number of common Dolphins seen in Santa Barbara Channel from 1996-2001.

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