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EPFL Master's program in Applied Mathematics Statement of Purpose

2 - Since you are applying for a masters degree course, it will be best to highlight your college education, work...

Graduatevalg01 - Feb 24, 2024Holt - Feb 27, 2024
Design in Architecture - AAS Scholarship - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

3 - you should more focus on connecting your academic background/professional experience to your motivation on choosing the course and major...

ScholarshipKata - Feb 20, 2024sselene - Feb 26, 2024
It is a natural process which animal species such as dinosaurs become extinct.

2 - Your discussion is not really very clear. You are too focused on using advanced vocabulary, which is not the...

Writing Feedbackdorypham123 - Feb 24, 2024Holt - Feb 25, 2024
GKS personal statement for Master of Science in Business Administration

2 - There are only academic accomplishments mentioned in this essay. While it is well written at first glance, the reviewer...

ScholarshipDeepaaaa11 - Feb 23, 2024Holt - Feb 25, 2024
Some students don't enroll in science majors - why?

2 - This is a writer's personal opinion. It should not be used to start the restatement section as it...

Writing FeedbackDann - Feb 23, 2024Holt - Feb 25, 2024
Food Science - Why are these knowledge and skills important to your country's development?

2 - The data that you present covers information relevant to your country. Therefore, the main thought of the reviewer will...

Scholarshipirndyhayw - Feb 23, 2024Holt - Feb 25, 2024
ielts writing task 2: transportation

2 - Do not write run - on sentences. The prompt restatement and writer's opinion section was written as a long...

Writing FeedbackTaylorDn - Feb 22, 2024Holt - Feb 25, 2024
IELTS Writing task 1_Table_The number of visitors in the UK and their average spending

2 - The analysis portion of the essay is well developed. Although, a little bit more discussion would have helped you...

Writing FeedbackTTT3miml - Feb 21, 2024Holt - Feb 23, 2024
GKS Graduate Program 2024 PERSONAL STATEMENT - Interior Architecture

2 - While your motivations for applying to the program are admirable, you seem to fall short of the other qualifications...

Scholarshipsselene - Feb 21, 2024Holt - Feb 23, 2024
the importance of Oneness

2 - Better than one? One what? I think you meant to say "Standing as one is better than standing...

Writing Feedbackclyro - Feb 21, 2024Holt - Feb 23, 2024
The international community should reduce or eliminate the debts of the world's poorest countries

2 - It is not enough to simply be against the idea presented when developing the Writer's opinion. Review the required...

Writing Feedbackdotranuyennhi - Feb 20, 2024Holt - Feb 23, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people

2 - While the restatement of the topic is aligned with the original discussion, there is a problem with the writer's...

Writing Feedbackcardilua - Feb 20, 2024Holt - Feb 22, 2024
Sop to pursue PhD in Climate Change/ Hydrology

2 - I really did not see any purpose behind this statement. A statement of purpose should not be confused with...

ScholarshipNahida Naya - Feb 19, 2024Holt - Feb 22, 2024
Media - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? AUSTRALIAN AWARDS ESSAY

2 - Expand on these discussion points at the very start. These will be the basis of your university...

ScholarshipLordLordy - Feb 19, 2024Holt - Feb 22, 2024
There are more workers working from home and more students studying from home

2 - Pick one. You cannot use both in an actual test. This sort of undecided writing will cost you...

Writing FeedbackAyan Nguyen - Feb 19, 2024Holt - Feb 22, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - WORK AND STUDY FROM HOME

2 - The paraphrasing for the original topic is acceptable. The writer understood the writing task as can be seen from...

Writing Feedbackngducng - Feb 17, 2024Holt - Feb 22, 2024
Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2 - You have not met the 250 word count for the presentation. This will be an automatic failing score essay...

Writing Feedbackastu123 - Feb 17, 2024Holt - Feb 22, 2024
Ielts writing task 2- animal experimentation

2 - While your essay meets the word requirement of 250 words, and you will avoid penalties based on word count,...

Writing Feedbackgalaxy94 - Feb 16, 2024Holt - Feb 22, 2024
IELTS Writing Task 2: Online and traditional classroom

3 - In the conclusion you need to summarize the information that you have analyzed and give your personal opinion about...

Writing FeedbackRandomStudent - Feb 16, 2024cardilua - Feb 20, 2024
Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus - Advanced spectroscopy in chemistry (ASC)

2 - Being an Erasmus Mundus motivational letter, I was expecting a far more interesting and informative presentation than this. Your...

Lettersblanicen - Feb 15, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
Personal statement for master in information technology with artificial intelligence specialization

2 - Since this is a personal statement, it should not touch on your academic and professional exposure. The personal statement...

Graduateuserc - Feb 15, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
Short statement of purpose for RSM MSc about entrepreneurship and Climate Change.

2 - My opinion is that you do not really respond to the question being asked. Your introduction is confusing and...

Graduateantoinebernzrd - Feb 14, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
The graph below gives information on the performance of a train company in October and November

2 - When you mention the type of image, it would be best for your score if you immediately include information...

Writing Feedbackhaminhuynh - Feb 14, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
[IELTS TASK 1] Numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum before and after it was refurbished

2 - The most ideal word count for a task 1 essay would be 175 words. That would assure you of...

Writing Feedbacksnackara - Feb 13, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
Essay for MS application (Topic: Comparison between two types of Electric Vehicles and their future)

2 - Unfortunately, I am not impressed by the writing level you have presented in this essay. Rather than sounding like...

ScholarshipHassan007 - Feb 13, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
Personal statement in Plant Pathology Ph.D. for KGSP scholarship 2024

2 - You are already applying for a PhD scholarship. One of the highest levels of academic study. So application information...

Scholarshipaya ibrahim - Feb 12, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
Sonography program essay for application

2 - The story about your grandma and how she inspired you to become a sonographer is the worst story you...

UndergraduateMallorykight - Feb 12, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
For Review- Letter of motivation for Global Scholarship under Lund University, Sweden

2 - Paragraph 5 should be further developed. That paragraph offers you the opportunity to further enhance your qualifications as a...

Lettersnafiz33 - Feb 12, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
YSEALI essay application: The Future of Mental Health In Southeast Asia (2024 theme)

2 - You need to set up an actual scenario in the response to the prompt. The situation has to be...

Undergraduatehmaily - Feb 12, 2024Holt - Feb 18, 2024
[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] Percentage of households

4 - For the overview: I recommend you to look at the tendency of all keys, you should also be able...

Writing Feedbacksandy21709 - Jan 31, 2024caohuyen93 - Feb 18, 2024
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