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Motivation letter for Erasmus Mundus Joint Masters in Imaging

2 - You are actually trying to over present yourself as an authority figure in this essay which may not sit...

Lettersparallax404 - Dec 31, 2025Holt - Dec 31, 2025
ERASMUS MUNDUS INT'L MASTERS IN GLOBAL MARKETS AND LOCAL CREATIVES: GLOBAL MARKETS & DEVELOPMENT

2 - This is the information that the reviewer will be looking for. You started with some pretty irrelevant information...

ScholarshipTHEOPHILUS - Dec 31, 2025Holt - Dec 31, 2025
Motivation for CYBERSURE - Master's programme in Cybersecurity and Assurance

2 - There is no such committee. There is only a general admissions committee that considers all of the applicants...

Lettersdumbled00r - Dec 30, 2025Holt - Dec 31, 2025
Seek your inputs-Statement of Purpose-Erasmus Mundus GLOCAL-Sustainable Business Development

2 - This aspect should be highlighted as the foundation of your motivation. Being a very strong statement coming from...

Scholarshipsonle1024 - Dec 29, 2025Holt - Dec 30, 2025
How Fashion Reflects Personality and Confidence

2 - I will applaud you for the good writing that you have presented in these 2 paragraphs. While there are...

Writing FeedbackLeonn - Dec 29, 2025Holt - Dec 29, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 sample about success and the drivers behind it

2 - You immediately misinterpreted the speakers / point of view as provided in the original prompt within your first sentence....

Writing Feedbackquocnguyen - Dec 29, 2025Holt - Dec 29, 2025
Erasmus Mundus Neuroscience + data science program motivation letter

2 - I like your approach to your motivational letter. However, it still needs to be corrected. For starters, there is...

Graduateobb0526 - Dec 28, 2025Holt - Dec 29, 2025
The gender distribution of educators in the UK - BAR CHART - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 REPORT

2 - The summary overview is too short and does not meet the required sentence requirement. You have to present at...

Writing FeedbackAnnaDao - Dec 27, 2025Holt - Dec 29, 2025
I like to Gamble - Common Application Essay Help

2 - I would not use the term "gamble" in this case. Since this is an academic essay, it is better...

Undergraduateluptla - Dec 27, 2025Holt - Dec 29, 2025
Personal Statement Letter for IMSISS with ERASMUS MUNDUS / Strategic assessments

4 - The reviewers prefer that the personal statements lean more towards the reflective and pondering side of the applicant. That...

Graduateghosttwwriter - Dec 26, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
This is my Motivation letter for UvA can someone tell me if it good and what changes i can do

2 - The tone being used in this essay is too informal. Almost AI like in tone and writing content. While...

GraduatePunitj - Dec 27, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Fashion Design major - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR KGSP/GKS

3 - Thank you so much I really appreciate your help. I'll fix my personal statement....

Scholarshipnorceulea - Dec 24, 2025norceulea - Dec 27, 2025
Personal statement for IMSISS

2 - A personal statement is not the same as a motivation essay. Therefore, the minute the reviewer read these...

GraduateBelieve4580 - Dec 24, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Do you think public transportation should be free for everyone

2 - The prompt paraphrase is acceptable. The thesis statement is well developed. However, you should have directly responded to the...

Writing Feedbackpnq1982009 - Dec 23, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Stipendium Hungaricum - Motivation Letter for BSc in Earth Science

2 - The response is too wordy without enough relevant content. More than 50% of this essay would be better suited...

Undergraduateclementine11 - Dec 23, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Why Studying Abroad is Life Changing – Erasmus Master in Medical Technology and Healthcare Busines

2 - Your response is not well rounded. The reviewer will be looking for a response that mixes the social life...

Scholarshiploonatheworld - Dec 23, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Impact on Master's in my home country – Erasmus Master in Medical Technology and Healthcare Busine

2 - This does not provide an impact full opening to the paragraph. You can actually start with the 2nd...

Scholarshiploonatheworld - Dec 23, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Career Impact of This Programme – Erasmus Master in Medical Technology and Healthcare Business

2 - I think it would be better to say you will evolve into a biomedical engineer with leadership skills...

Scholarshiploonatheworld - Dec 23, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Common App Personal Statement-international education major

2 - I am not sure which of the prompt your wrote this in response to but I have to say,...

UndergraduateTopaz - Dec 23, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
My hands and brain - Common App - Personal Statement

2 - There is something wrong with this recollection. You were 4 and taking your 7 year old sister to...

UndergraduateScormbl - Dec 22, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Scrolling into Stress: A Proposal to Limit Teen Social Media Use for Mental and Academic Well-Being

2 - Your introduction should not be citing actual information yet. Since this is an overview of the paper focus, the...

Research PapersJgisselle - Dec 22, 2025Holt - Dec 26, 2025
Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship, Msc in Autonomous Vehicle Control Engineer

2 - Your "Eureka!" moment that opened your eyes to the wonders of autonomous vehicles is not convincing. It is too...

Lettersminh2910 - Dec 22, 2025Holt - Dec 26, 2025
Academic Personal Statement for Masters in Robotics at a top university in the USA.

2 - The rationale behind your desire to pursue this masters degree is difficult to find in this presentation. The paragraph...

Graduateneevan642 - Dec 22, 2025Holt - Dec 25, 2025
Academic Statement of purpose for Masters in Computer Science at a top university in the USA.

6 - The advice I gave you regarding how to fix this essay applies to the next personal statement that you...

GraduateAbhirup7 - Dec 20, 2025Holt - Dec 24, 2025
Requirements for Germany Scholarship

5 - If your accomplishments are not related to the course you wish to enroll then, I do not suggest mentioning...

Student TalkDanicaRamirez - Oct 19, 2025Holt - Dec 24, 2025
Essay on Revenue Sharing in College Athletics:Why Fair Compensation for Athletes Is Overdue

2 - Clarify that this is to be revenue sharing with the university. Since the university earns from ticket sales,...

Writing Feedbackmelissarivas0126 - Dec 21, 2025Holt - Dec 21, 2025
Environmental Impact of Artificial Intelligence

2 - You cannot end your thesis statement with "there are currently no clear solutions". Since this has now turned into...

Research Paperscsworker09 - Dec 20, 2025Holt - Dec 21, 2025
Health applications - Erasmus Mundus Master in Medical Technology and Healthcare Business

2 - You successfully pointed out the problem that you are facing in your line of medical technology and care. However,...

Scholarshiploonatheworld - Dec 20, 2025Holt - Dec 21, 2025
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Some people think it is better for children to grown up in the city

2 - The first paragraph contains 2 problems: 1. The first sentence is a run-on. The 2 differing opinions must...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Dec 19, 2025Holt - Dec 20, 2025
Motivation letter for Erasmus Mundus Master Impact Entrepreneurship EMMIE

3 - Merged: Motivation letter for Scholarship EMMIE Hello everyone, I am applying to the Erasmus Mundus Joint...

LettersMiftaaj01 - Dec 10, 2025Miftaaj01 - Dec 19, 2025
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