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3 - I think your ideas are quite good but they should be illustrated with more examples and evidence. For e.g.:...
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3 - - You mentioned the figure "90% of them..." is good but I think it lacked validity. Readers might wonder...
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3 - I think " I will look at the reasoning of both camps before presenting why" is unnecessary and I...
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|Ads lead people to make unnecessary purchases or they just introduce new products to customers
3 - I think your statement is quite unclear, you should answer directly what the question is about (choosing which view)...
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NEW - Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while others argue that robots might...
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GraduateNikesh - Oct 28, 2021Holt - Oct 29, 2021
|IELTS Task2 Two Views discussion about talents and hard work (250 words)
3 - "It is a common belief ... However, I firmly ... Therefore, ..." THIS IS MY PARAPHRASE FOR THE...
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|IELTS Writing task 2 - Telling children that they can achieve anything if putting their mind to it
NEW - In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. WHAT ARE...
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|Personal Statement about suitability of being part of Glocal:Erasmus Mundus Global Political Economy
2 - Before discussing your career path, consider your academic background first. There is no connection between your Social Work...
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2 - One of the major requirements of this essay is the undergraduate degree explanation. There must bean explanation of how...
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4 - In my opinion, you could use "passenger traffic" instead of "the number of people who..." to diversify your expressions....
Writing Feedbackphuongthuy9876 - Oct 27, 2021Ashe - Oct 28, 2021
|Education: which subject deserves more attention History or Science & Technology in school?
2 - This is an incorrect reference. The overall opinion will be coming from you, as the writer. Reference yourself...
Writing FeedbackLyn123 - Oct 27, 2021Holt - Oct 28, 2021
|To act towards a common goal. Chevening - Leadership Journey Essay
2 - This is a very inferior and non-qualifying leadership essay. Itis weak in the sense that the background does not...
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|Replacing old buildings by new ones.
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|Ielts essay: In the modern society, children are less reliant on their parents (250 words)
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|IELTS writing task 2: Companies use different way to increase sales.
2 - The student takes on the prompt restatement in a very complex manner. Not to say that it is not...
Writing FeedbackChristinedang - Oct 27, 2021Holt - Oct 28, 2021
|Task 1: The table compares the number of travellers to five different countries and their spendings
2 - This essay will automatically fail. The required and most important paragraph, the summary overview, is missing from the...
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|Challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well
3 - The world is changing rapidly as ... <good ^^> Each and every country experience are experiencing difficulties due...
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|IELTS task 2: Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourism industries.
2 - The discussion approach does not meet the prompt requirements. The discussion restatement is unrelated to the orginal topic: ...
Writing FeedbackHagnhang - Oct 26, 2021Holt - Oct 27, 2021
|I chose Information Engg Course at Ritsumeikan because.. of opportunities
2 - The discussion paragraphs are disconnected. Logical development and connection between paragraph ideas are necessary to properly answer the question....
Undergraduatefeminjo - Oct 26, 2021Holt - Oct 27, 2021
|Young students are obliged to study overseas languages in most schools
2 - The prompt paraphrase is nowhere near the original discussion topic. The issue is whether students should be pressured or...
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|Debating challenge - How did it affect you (COMMONAPP)
2 - The discussion should represent both sides of the story. Surely you were told the reason why you were being...
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|IELTS Writing Task 2 - life expectancy and a balanced society
Writing Feedbackseannolan - Oct 24, 2021seannolan - Oct 27, 2021
|The statistics regarding purchased tickets for cinema, concert and theatre
3 - The charts below (nothing is below in the answer sheet) show how selected age groups in three countries purchased...
Writing Feedbackhathuynongtrang - Oct 25, 2021Charlie William - Oct 26, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Tourism's influence economy and environment
5 - @hieuvo218 Thanks for answering. But don't "think" pls. Please give me reliable information that you know for sure. And...
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|My friends and family hold great trust in me and would describe me as ...
3 - Hii! This is not professional advice, just a peer-to-peer review based on what I've learned from past applicants &...
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