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GKS-G KOREAN LANGUAGE MAJOR, PERSONAL STATEMENT

4 - @vivibimil I'd recommend focusing more on your transformative experiences in Korea, detailing how they shaped your academic and personal...

Scholarshipvivibimil - Jul 15, 2024Vera24 - Aug 4, 2024
2025 GKS-U Study Plan on how to improve foreign language

3 - @kumaaa Your essay shows a thorough and proactive approach to learning Korean, emphasizing cultural immersion and practical application. Your...

Scholarshipkumaaa - Jul 23, 2024Vera24 - Aug 4, 2024
Addiction and Substance Abuse

2 - 1. The research paragraphs should not end with in-text citations. These references must have additional discussions included. The insight...

Research PapersJlentz13 - Aug 4, 2024Holt - Aug 4, 2024
English and Korean Languages - Study plan for the gks

2 - You have very good pre-arrival plans for both English and Hangul language proficiency presented in this essay. The problem,...

ScholarshipVera24 - Aug 3, 2024Holt - Aug 4, 2024
Task 1 - The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia had a baby

2 - Avoid using a run-on sentence for your summary overview. Concise references rely on your ability to present one idea...

Writing FeedbackUnessayforum - Aug 3, 2024Holt - Aug 4, 2024
Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings

2 - This is an incomplete thought. There is a missing verb here that would have completed the sentence idea...

Writing Feedbackkeylie tran - Aug 2, 2024Holt - Aug 4, 2024
Essay for a low income student scholarship about learning something new

2 - The discussion of EcoTech is not aligned with the prompt requirements. That total paragraph can be removed without affecting...

Undergraduatelofpty - Aug 1, 2024Holt - Aug 4, 2024
GKS-G Personal Statement Major in Tech Management (Switching from game development)

3 - @daBaby Your personal statement clearly outlines your passion for Technology Management and game development. It effectively connects the GKS...

ScholarshipdaBaby - Jul 23, 2024Vera24 - Aug 3, 2024
The bar chart below shows employment figures in different tourism-related industries

2 - What sort of chart was provided? The chart type is important because it will help the reader envision...

Writing Feedbacktangthuyduong304 - Jul 31, 2024Holt - Aug 1, 2024
How many overseas conferences held in Cities - IELTS 1

2 - You are missing the past tense word "were" which indicates a plural past for the conferences. This is...

Writing FeedbackLeMaiPhg - Jul 31, 2024Holt - Aug 1, 2024
TASK 1: the number of people who don't have occupation

2 - Please remember that the task 1 essay will score best once you write between 175 to 200 words. These...

Writing Feedbackphuthinh - Jul 31, 2024Holt - Aug 1, 2024
IELTS Writing task 2: Essay about healthiness problems and measures for that

2 - The paraphrasing is incorrect. It should mention, in your own words, that the weight increase is happening in some...

Writing FeedbackKitrute - Jul 31, 2024Holt - Aug 1, 2024
IELTS TASK 2 [Doctors and engineers, should be required to work ....]

2 - Hello, for a review of this essay based on the band sectional scoring and possible final score, you must...

Writing FeedbackQueen02 - Jul 31, 2024Holt - Aug 1, 2024
It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks.

2 - The paraphrasing is acceptable, although calling this an argument is an exaggeration. A discussion would have more aligned as...

Writing FeedbackTuyet Trinh - Jul 30, 2024Holt - Jul 31, 2024
what do you think will be the highest-paying occupation 50 years from now?

2 - Hmmm,,, the title of the essay and the content of the paragraphs are two extremely different and highly disconnected...

Writing FeedbackJane Mai - Jul 29, 2024Holt - Jul 29, 2024
Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country's success

2 - The essay is lacking 2 words to meet the minimum word count. Deductions, which will be applied to the...

Writing Feedbacktrannhatminh - Jul 29, 2024Holt - Jul 29, 2024
Registration of a paper in an identified academic field?

2 - It is customary to ask that the writer or researcher register in one academic field just to give yourself...

Research PapersLililo - Jul 28, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
Can discrimination be escaped?

3 - @Holt thanks so much on your feedback!...

Writing Feedbackquynnesanity - Jul 27, 2024quynnesanity - Jul 28, 2024
UBC Personal Profile - Various perspectives

2 - Avoid the reference point "I" in the descriptions from your parents and friends. You need to make sure that...

Undergraduatemdamissu - Jul 28, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
The future of the automotive industry

2 - I realize that this is a draft which leaves you plenty of room for improvement. I would probably start...

Writing FeedbackRcD - Jul 27, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Do people prefer arts to technology in your view?

2 - There is no need to justify the reasons why people would still look into art when you are trying...

Writing Feedbacklmaok - Jul 27, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
Are famous celebrities 'role models' for young generations?

2 - You should avoid presenting information that removes the focus from the actual discussion. There is no need to...

Writing Feedbackwslgods - Jul 26, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
Competition or cooperation in our society - IELTS 2

2 - The essay fails to use pronouns to reference the point of view being discussed in the body of paragraphs....

Writing FeedbackHoangminh06 - Jul 26, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day

2 - The summary overview is missing important reference information that has made it very difficult for me to understand the...

Writing Feedbackhaidang1010 - Jul 26, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
Software engineer - Motivation Letter for CERN Technical Studentship

2 - Your desire to be an inspiration to the students from your village is admirable. However, that should not be...

LettersAbhishekbhardwaj - Jul 26, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
IELTS Academic Writing Task 1: Tables, Exports by Michael

2 - I found myself confused by the summary overview presentation. What taxes? What nations? What years were covered? There is...

Writing FeedbackMichaelc - Jul 26, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
Motivation letter for PhD at University after M.Sc. in Biotechnology

2 - You need to reference the current work of the professor as well. Create a relationship between his research, and...

Letterslibrarymyth - Jul 25, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
the merits and demerits of taking a gap year and your own opinion

2 - Well, there is an inaccuracy in your presentation because this topic is not really a contentious issue. It is...

Writing Feedbacktvanh - Jul 25, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Essay about doing an enjoyable activity with a child and reading books

2 - The topic restatement is faulty. You forgot to reference that the activities are to be done with a child....

Writing Feedbackeddypham - Jul 24, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
Essay about the proposed new town plan

2 - I am not sure if there was only one picture provided for this analytical paper. Normally, a task 1...

Writing Feedbackindustrious - Jul 24, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
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