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Playing games teach you about life

3 - I think your ideas are quite good but they should be illustrated with more examples and evidence. For e.g.:...

Writing Feedbacklinh san - Oct 27, 2021elinita123 - Oct 30, 2021
A punishment is believed to be the best way to help children to distinguish right from wrong

3 - - You mentioned the figure "90% of them..." is good but I think it lacked validity. Readers might wonder...

Writing Feedbackanna10304 - Oct 28, 2021elinita123 - Oct 30, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 Some people think people working in creative arts should be financially support

3 - I think " I will look at the reasoning of both camps before presenting why" is unnecessary and I...

Writing FeedbackHuongNguyen2111 - Oct 27, 2021Quang Bao - Oct 30, 2021
Ads lead people to make unnecessary purchases or they just introduce new products to customers

3 - I think your statement is quite unclear, you should answer directly what the question is about (choosing which view)...

Writing FeedbackCharlie William - Oct 27, 2021Quang Bao - Oct 30, 2021
I need help for my essay for scholarship in accounting qualification - ACCA FIA (max 400 words)

3 - @Holt Thank you very much sir...

Scholarshiptuyethan2003 - Oct 29, 2021tuyethan2003 - Oct 30, 2021
Task 2 ielts: Robots will play an important role in future

NEW - Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while others argue that robots might...

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Taking advantage of the modern technology for the better life

3 - Thanks for your help...

Writing Feedbacklinhpham282 - Oct 25, 2021linhpham282 - Oct 29, 2021
Review My SOP for PhD in Nuclear thermal hydraulics

2 - How and why? How does this relate to your interest in CFD ? Every exposure needs to relate...

GraduateNikesh - Oct 28, 2021Holt - Oct 29, 2021
IELTS Task2 Two Views discussion about talents and hard work (250 words)

3 - "It is a common belief ... However, I firmly ... Therefore, ..." THIS IS MY PARAPHRASE FOR THE...

Writing Feedbacksloth - Oct 28, 2021Phuongnguyen256 - Oct 29, 2021
IELTS Writing task 2 - Telling children that they can achieve anything if putting their mind to it

NEW - In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. WHAT ARE...

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Personal Statement about suitability of being part of Glocal:Erasmus Mundus Global Political Economy

2 - Before discussing your career path, consider your academic background first. There is no connection between your Social Work...

UndergraduateMahle - Oct 28, 2021Holt - Oct 29, 2021
Study in UK - I decided to take three different courses in business; essay for Chevening

2 - One of the major requirements of this essay is the undergraduate degree explanation. There must bean explanation of how...

ScholarshipKatsuk - Oct 28, 2021Holt - Oct 28, 2021
The number of people who usually travel by underground station in London from 6.00 to 22.00 per day

4 - In my opinion, you could use "passenger traffic" instead of "the number of people who..." to diversify your expressions....

Writing Feedbackphuongthuy9876 - Oct 27, 2021Ashe - Oct 28, 2021
Education: which subject deserves more attention History or Science & Technology in school?

2 - This is an incorrect reference. The overall opinion will be coming from you, as the writer. Reference yourself...

Writing FeedbackLyn123 - Oct 27, 2021Holt - Oct 28, 2021
To act towards a common goal. Chevening - Leadership Journey Essay

2 - This is a very inferior and non-qualifying leadership essay. Itis weak in the sense that the background does not...

Scholarshipelflaco - Oct 27, 2021Holt - Oct 28, 2021
ielts writing task 2 Should the Government tax fast food heavily

2 - Taxes should be in singular form (tax) since there is only one type being considered. Before...

Writing Feedbackthuhuyen - Oct 27, 2021Holt - Oct 28, 2021
Replacing old buildings by new ones.

2 - Your ersonal opinion is not a required part of this discussion and should not be part of the...

Writing Feedbacknhatlinhle95 - Oct 27, 2021Holt - Oct 28, 2021
Ielts essay: In the modern society, children are less reliant on their parents (250 words)

3 - Thank you <3 <3 <3...

Writing Feedbacknhaluhanh - Oct 27, 2021nhaluhanh - Oct 28, 2021
IELTS writing task 2: Companies use different way to increase sales.

2 - The student takes on the prompt restatement in a very complex manner. Not to say that it is not...

Writing FeedbackChristinedang - Oct 27, 2021Holt - Oct 28, 2021
Task 1: The table compares the number of travellers to five different countries and their spendings

2 - This essay will automatically fail. The required and most important paragraph, the summary overview, is missing from the...

Writing FeedbackCharlie William - Oct 26, 2021Holt - Oct 27, 2021
Challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well

3 - The world is changing rapidly as ... <good ^^> Each and every country experience are experiencing difficulties due...

Writing Feedbackpriuet - Oct 26, 2021Charlie William - Oct 27, 2021
IELTS task 2: Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourism industries.

2 - The discussion approach does not meet the prompt requirements. The discussion restatement is unrelated to the orginal topic: ...

Writing FeedbackHagnhang - Oct 26, 2021Holt - Oct 27, 2021
I chose Information Engg Course at Ritsumeikan because.. of opportunities

2 - The discussion paragraphs are disconnected. Logical development and connection between paragraph ideas are necessary to properly answer the question....

Undergraduatefeminjo - Oct 26, 2021Holt - Oct 27, 2021
Young students are obliged to study overseas languages in most schools

2 - The prompt paraphrase is nowhere near the original discussion topic. The issue is whether students should be pressured or...

Writing Feedbackvannam1 - Oct 26, 2021Holt - Oct 27, 2021
Debating challenge - How did it affect you (COMMONAPP)

2 - The discussion should represent both sides of the story. Surely you were told the reason why you were being...

Undergraduatedezade - Oct 26, 2021Holt - Oct 27, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 2 - life expectancy and a balanced society

3 - @Holt Thanks so much!...

Writing Feedbackseannolan - Oct 24, 2021seannolan - Oct 27, 2021
The statistics regarding purchased tickets for cinema, concert and theatre

3 - The charts below (nothing is below in the answer sheet) show how selected age groups in three countries purchased...

Writing Feedbackhathuynongtrang - Oct 25, 2021Charlie William - Oct 26, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Tourism's influence economy and environment

5 - @hieuvo218 Thanks for answering. But don't "think" pls. Please give me reliable information that you know for sure. And...

Writing Feedbackleaf2301 - Oct 25, 2021leaf2301 - Oct 26, 2021
Ielts writing task2 about environment evaluation

3 - @Holt Thanks so much for your comment. Which band do u think i can receive??...

Writing Feedbackkjangxx - Oct 25, 2021kjangxx - Oct 26, 2021
My friends and family hold great trust in me and would describe me as ...

3 - Hii! This is not professional advice, just a peer-to-peer review based on what I've learned from past applicants &...

Undergraduatebhavye - Oct 25, 2021Aiza05 - Oct 26, 2021