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|The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives.
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|Dicussion between putting some strict controls about noise and making as much noise as possible
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|Some people feel that advertising has negative effects on our society
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|"From Adversity to Aspiration: My Journey of Passion, Determination, and Cultural Bridging" - GKS
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|Week-long bursts of passion - my Questbridge personal essay
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|Town in Sudan - How have the influences in your life shaped you?
2 - The essay lacks focus and becomes confusing to read at times. You should simply refer to the country as...
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|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] GETTING OLD IN THE MODERN WORLD
2 - [quote=cangusocduaaa]This essay shall conduct a thorough assessment of both viewpoints so that a reasoned conclusion can be drawn.[/quoteWhile you...
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|[WRITING TASK 1] Percentage of passing driving license of males and females in an Asian nation
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|AN ESSAY ABOUT THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF LIVING IN THE MODERN WORLD
3 - It is very important that whenever you write pros and cons, write them in 2 separate structured paragraphs. Your...
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|Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination
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|Teenagers should work unpaid, do you agree with the view? Write about 250 words
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|The different of weight in England
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|[WRITING TASK 2] To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population
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|WRITING TASK 1: LINE GRAPH - CINEMA ATTENDANCE BY AGE GROUP IN THE UK
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|Clean water - Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay
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|Common App main essay: Mother's Battle Changed my life
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|GKS-U Personal Statement Business Administration; time to complete my university education in Korea
2 - This response is actually more aligned with the Language Study Goals than the requirements for the personal statement. Have...
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|What is an ideal society? And how can we create it?
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|WRITING TASK1: LINE GRAPH - GREEN TRANSPORTATION USAGE
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|Writing Task 2: Some people think that students should study the science of food and how to prepare
2 - I do not see an appropriate personal opinion provided in the discussion points. Based on the way you represented...
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|Some students want to learn additional subjects. Others think should focus on getting a degree.
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|The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income
2 - You did not clearly identify the type of chart presented in the task. The image identifier helps to increase...
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|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Governments should make universities free for everyone
2 - Did you review the response requirement for the essay prior to drafting it? If you did, then you would...
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|You want to sell the televesion. You think a friend of your might like to buy it from you.
2 - There are several discrepancies in your letter that affect the clarity of the information. 1. You have not...
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|IELTS Writing task 2 - The excessive use of smartphones in free time
2 - The summary paraphrase and writer's opinion are unacceptable. The writer does not meet the passing preliminary TA score requirements...
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