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DissertationsUromi - Feb 1, 2020Uromi - Feb 2, 2020
|Admission Essay for Master of Health in Sweden
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback. Actually, this is a Letter of Intent for master degree program....
Scholarshipdindarahmaniar - Feb 1, 2020dindarahmaniar - Feb 2, 2020
|Critical judgment of work from experts has little value - GRE
2 - There is a lack of clarity in some sentences that tend to hinder the message of the writer the...
Writing Feedbackgrace85516 - Feb 1, 2020Holt - Feb 2, 2020
|Is better for kids to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than at secondary?
Writing FeedbackPhuongbo - Jan 30, 2020howardturtle - Feb 2, 2020
|Specific things to be done to overcome the challenges of living and studying in a different country
ScholarshipUromi - Feb 1, 2020Uromi - Feb 2, 2020
|"Becoming a Musician by self teaching" - Scholarship Essay
3 - Got you, Focus more on the Academic part of self learning than the CCA Achievements I have made with...
ScholarshipCHRISOD - Jan 30, 2020CHRISOD - Feb 1, 2020
|Master of Data Science - Supporting Statement for Australia Awards Scholarship
4 - @ankars You have a nice draft, however I would advice you do not lump your knowledge and courses for...
Scholarshipankars - Jan 30, 2020Uromi - Feb 1, 2020
|My long-standing fascination - STATEMENT OF PURPOSE CHEMICAL ENGINEERING MSc PROGRAMME
3 - @Kilekun This Essay does not show any purpose of you undertaking your studies in XXX University. You didn't make...
GraduateKilekun - Jan 31, 2020Uromi - Feb 1, 2020
|IVEY AEO ESSAY (Character in Leadership)
4 - Well, this is certainly a very reflective essay response. You actually managed to respond to the prompt in a...
Undergraduateyellowjello123 - Jan 14, 2020Holt - Feb 1, 2020
|Unethical methods in advertising today
3 - This essay will automatically a failing score under the TA section. You have created your own discussion requirements as...
Writing FeedbackMartinmirror - Jan 31, 2020Holt - Feb 1, 2020
|The swimming community- Advice on my Queen's PSE Essay
UndergraduateFercruz - Jan 29, 2020Fercruz - Jan 31, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 The graph below shows trends in US meat and poultry consumption.
3 - While this presentation is good enough to help assess your English writing and comprehension abilities, you should have considered...
Writing Feedbackjohnle29 - Jan 31, 2020Holt - Jan 31, 2020
|Is a review written in the past tense or present?
2 - When writing a review, always use the past tense in reference to the situation. Since the reviews are always...
Grammar, UsageSandOWL - Jan 31, 2020Holt - Jan 31, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task I: UK Cinema Attendance of different age citizens, from 1990 to 2010
5 - Your vocaulary really makes me amazed. But I suggest that you should harmonize between 2 bodies in terms of...
Writing Feedbackkanzanism - Jan 17, 2020johnle29 - Jan 31, 2020
|Supporting statement 1 about course choice for NZAID Scholarship application
3 - Your essay actually carries certain responses to the actual question. The problem is that you have not properly directed...
ScholarshipXPROFF - Jan 31, 2020Holt - Jan 31, 2020
|Four modes of transport in terms of the amounts of goods they conveyed in the UK from 1974 to 2002
Writing Feedbackjohnle29 - Jan 30, 2020johnle29 - Jan 31, 2020
|[ IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Topic: Obesity is a serious problem today
5 - There are 2 problems points in your presentation as I see it. The introduction paraphrase and the concluding statement....
Writing FeedbackSam an - Jan 30, 2020Holt - Jan 31, 2020
|Ptdf Scholarship personal statement Civil Engineering - oil & gas industry
3 - The statement is weak in overall content. The why is not strongly represented in terms of how the completion...
ScholarshipSofiatajide - Jan 30, 2020Holt - Jan 31, 2020
|The presented graph compares four types of transport in terms of the amount of goods transported
3 - You need to be accurate in your representation of the graph information. There is no reference to "mail" in...
Writing FeedbackAmanda92 - Jan 30, 2020Holt - Jan 31, 2020
|Personal statement GKS 2020 - Application for a Master in environmental or project management
2 - Not being able to afford to pay your way through masters school is one of the worst reasons you...
ScholarshipMsAnneMendoza - Jan 30, 2020Holt - Jan 31, 2020
|Aging populations in countries - WRITING TASK 1 Ielts
5 - I suggest that you should pharaphrase a few words like percentage, proportion <=> figure, then <=> over the following...
Writing Feedbackanhthythy - Jan 5, 2020johnle29 - Jan 30, 2020
|Adult education - bar chart and pie chart for ielts writing
3 - I suggest you should use some words like: mention, quote or cite for better expression. For example, instead of...
Writing Feedbackmimiya - Jan 25, 2020johnle29 - Jan 30, 2020
|The proportion of visitors to England who paid a visit to four diverse attractions in Brighton
2 - I think that it is a very good essay but there are some spelling mistakes such as remaining, meantime....
Writing Feedbackjohnle29 - Jan 30, 2020Amanda92 - Jan 30, 2020
|Statement of Purpose for Data Science & Analytics (MSc) from Cork Institute of Technology
3 - One thing that reviewers do not really like coming across in any sort of essay is a quotation from...
GraduateZeroToInfinity - Jan 30, 2020Holt - Jan 30, 2020
|Personal Statement Masters in Data Science / Finance Major
Graduatelethalasian - Jan 27, 2020lethalasian - Jan 29, 2020
|Essay on an important political issue concerning my community and my generation. -UT Austin prompt
Undergraduatezanwar2 - Jan 29, 2020zanwar2 - Jan 29, 2020
|Motivation Letter for master in materials science
Scholarshipmustyvocabs2020 - Jan 28, 2020mustyvocabs2020 - Jan 29, 2020
|The table gives information about the employment sectors in which people from 3 age groups worked
5 - Try to observe the data vertically (by age groups) first, then horizontally. You can start by creating general statements...
Writing Feedbackeyesliu0715 - Jan 27, 2020Ulaai - Jan 29, 2020
|"I'll use every split second to improve myself" - Erasmus Mundus Joint Master's Program application
3 - Having the passion to languages A particular advice I have heard a lot when it comes to write personal...
Scholarshipakbariy - Jan 29, 2020Ulaai - Jan 29, 2020
|Cashew apple juice concentrate quality. OUTLINE OF PROPOSED RESEARCH TOPIC AND OBJECTIVES
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