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Stephen King is right, we ...
Also, this is a run on sentence called a "comma splice." Google comma splice to see what I mean.
King is right. We are all mentally ill to a point, in the sense that ___________ (give a more specific argument in this thesis sentence.)
another comma splice:
No one is completely perfect; as King points out we all do odd things.--- I fixed it with a semi-colon.
Looneytoons characters are always getting flattened by something or having their faces turned around.
Great sentence!!
by how we show
are our insanity.
great essay!! This is a cool topic. In a book by Chogyam Trungpa I read abut "basic sanity" that is the goal meditation practice...
It is pretty crazy that we enjoy seeing violence.
It is pretty crazy that we respond physiologically to certain ideas, making ourselves feel discomfort from physical pympoms associated with anger or sadness. Our bodies rebel against certain ideas... We are pretty crazy...