depicts the plight of women in Afghanistan by portraying male dominance, the low status of women, and marriage."
This is not strong. In order to be strong, it has to be sharp. A sharp thesis is one that is "narrow," and by that I mean it has to say something more specific. I could say the Star Wars trilogy is a story of good verses evil in a futuristic, distant past, but that would not be very sharp. It is sharper if I make KEEN observations: The Star Wars trilogy expresses ideas that parallel Eastern philosophy's notions of mastery, energy, and spiritual enlightenment. -----> after making this thesis, I can argue about it.
Who would argue with your thesis? Nobody! So make an assertion that is specific enough for someone to argue with it. That makes it meaningful!
You might want to pull out 10 quotations/citations from the book, look at them all together, and then wait for a thesis statement to come to mind.