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I need to recorrect my words that i used in Compaign


What does re- online shop mean?
It means that you can meet us face to face and choose your product if you like ,so you can order it online and get 5% discount on the price of any product .
those products mimic foreign and Arabian cultures such as Itali,Spain, Turkey,India, Jordan, China and Palestine which can suit all tastes.

How many branches of Embrosanistina shop will be opened up in UK?
Our shop will have 3 branches in one which can make your day enjoyable with us in distinctive ways .
Yes , one of those departments will provide courses online include learning Arabic language natively ,cooking arabian foods ,learn with us the art of sweing and embroidery.Besides there will be a course to learn how to dance different types of Arabian Dabka .
The rest will provide services for all customers like making arabian dishes for private occasions such as wedding, graduation ceremonies , birthday parties. In addition you can rent embroidered clothes from our shop.

What are the troubles in our way to achieve our aims ?
Due to the trave restrictions on Palestine, we could hardly get some of the products to the UK . each product needs a twice amount of cost as much as the cost of each product to be shipping.

What do we need the money for ?
We will finish paying for the groups of people who made those lovely things ( Embrodired bracelets, necklaces, embroidered medals , embroidered dresses, embroidered bags ) to you all
Also the part of money will pay for :
Products expenses specially embroidered accessories
To rent the place of the shop monthly in Coventry -Uk
Our travel tickets from London to Ireland -Glasgow to Brighton
Liverpool to Coventry to sell our products .

Please don't forget to check the perks ;)

Why do people name us that we are as different as chalk and cheese?
Because our shop will be Peripatetic , we can offer services from Coventry then we will move to Liverpool -Glasgow, - London Ireland (Belfast )and many cities.

With your support we can cover our final expenses for us . your generosity can make us to keep on what we start !

Here are my ideas.

What does re- online shop mean? {this still sounds like an odd term to me - where did you get it?}
It means that you can meet us face to face and choose your product if you like , {or] you can order it online and get 5% discount on the price of any product .
[Our] products mimic {do you mean "highlight"? mimic has sort of a bad connotation} foreign and Arabian cultures such as [Italy],Spain, Turkey,India, Jordan, China and Palestine[,] which can suit all tastes.

How many branches of Embrosanistina shop [branches] will be opened up in UK?
Thank you so much
U really helped me alot
Actually re-Online shop it's a new method we create to sell products by meeting the trader then choose your product online and get discount
Anyway i really appreciate what you did for me
But can you tell me what is the main problem i faced with writing
Kind regards
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