Dear Madam,
I have an idea to write a my essay that is cause/effect of shopping
May you give me some more ideas, please?
What is cause?
and what is effect?
How to have a good introduction about the essay?
In my view, people addict shopping because they want to satisfy their eyes and look for clothes in good prize or make good apparearance
As a result of going to the shopping is lost finance and family conflict that lead to divorce
John
Greetings!
I think you have some good ideas! Will you be writing only about shopping as an addiction? If so, there might be more to the "cause" than just wanting to look good. Addictive behaviors usually have deeper roots, often stemming from low self-esteem and insecurity, or depression. You are right about the financial effects; there could even be legal problems, if the shopping addict spends too much on credit cards or begins shoplifting to feed their shopping habit.
I hope this helps with some ideas!
Thanks,
Sarah, EssayForum.com
Hello Sarah,
Thank you for your helping
On my essay "shopping as a addiction", this is my cause. You think if I follow form of cause and effect essay. If not, how to go a truth direction following my content. If so, can you correct grammar and writting errors, please?
Like kinds of other addiction, shopping addiction is caused by uncontrollable regular habits. Especially, this habit will increase and happen more and more when shopping addicts meet strong feel. For example, when they are sad, alone, and bored, they go shopping with thinking to reduce stress. To satisfy shopping famine and thirst, shopping addicts are ready to buy even unneeded goods. Lack of control in shopping addictive behavior is also formed by media like internet, advertise and TV. Advertise attract shoppers through "big sale programs," and Internet provide "Online buying" that satisfy instance demands for shopping addicts. Thus, loss of control in a frequent habit of shopper causes shopping addictive behaviors.
John
Greetings!
I did not really understand your question about a "truth direction," but I would be happy to help with some editing. :-)
Like kinds of other addiction, shopping addiction is caused by uncontrollable regular habits. This habit will worsen and happen more often when shopping addicts have emotional stresses. For example, when they are sad, lonely, or bored, they go shopping without really thinking to reduce stress. To satisfy shopping famine and thirst, shopping addicts are ready to buy even unneeded goods. Lack of control in shopping addictive behavior is also formed by media such as the internet, print advertisements and TV. Advertising attract shoppers through "big sale programs," and the internet provides "Online buying" that satisfies instant demands for shopping addicts. This easy access can become a habit. Thus, a frequent habit leads to loss of control and, eventually, addictive behaviors for those who are susceptible.
Best of luck in your studies!
Thanks,
Sarah, EssayForum.com
