Chevening Networking Essay and Career Plans Essay - questions before I start

Hello everyone,

I hope you are doing great with your essays :)

Some inquiries in regard to my chevening essays

I have 3 questions and hope the Forum reviewers and colleagues will be available to help me.

1: In my Networking essay, I highlighted (3) short examples about my networking essays where I connected my students with international colleagues, built positive relationships with schools through activities and helped a team of young writers to get fund to expand their work. And at the end, I wrote about 5 lines clarifying that I'm going to benefit from this special opportunity, willing to exchange my experience with others and share what I'm going to learn once I'm back home. Is it sufficient?

2: In my career plan essay, as I'm working in the field of education and the only British organization here in Palestine is the British council which is working on a few programs which are not permanent, can I say that my short-term goals is to start long-term cooperation between my organization and the British council on various projects and help in sharing the values and strategies of the British educational system here in Palestine?

3: Regarding the short-term and long-term goals. Is conducting workshops and activities - within the organization I work for - to share the experience I learned in the UK with my beneficiaries here and making interventions on the curricular can be considered as short-term goals where as planning to work as a freelance consultant in 5 years can be considered a long-term goal? Unfortunately, I couldn't understand and differentiate between the short-term and long-term goals ..

Many thanks for your help ..

@Ghaidaa It will be difficult for me to respond to your questions at this point because you are specifically asking about the content of your essays. Unless I am able to read the specific essays, assess the content of your work, and then compare it with your questions, I will not be able to give yo a definitive response. Every essay has its strengths and weaknesses and the Chevening reviewer(s) will be on the lookout for certain information in every essay. These specific requirements are what the prompts are meant to help you address in your writing. If you followed the prompt and delivered the required information, then you should not have any worries regarding your essays.

If you can post the individual essays in separate threads at this forum then I can review your work. Post your individual concerns at the end of every essay so I will be sure to respond to your specific concerns. I will help you create the best essay for your application, but I cannot assure you that you will be granted the scholarship. Although I have assisted a significant number of awardees, their credentials, when presented along with their essays all helped to get them through to the final round of considerations.