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"disruptive social effects of learning" How to write a good introduction on education


nando89 1 / -  
Sep 13, 2010   #1
I've been staring at my computer screen for like the last 2 hours . I have to write a paper on how an education destroys while it contructs. I need to analyze the painful phychological and disruptive social effects of learning. Im really struggling with my intro, for some reason i always struggle with my intro when ever i write an essay and i always feel like i need to it before i move on. This time i actually manage to write three paragraphs, but i cant stop thinking about my intro.

can anybody give me any advice on a good intro. i was thinking of starting out with a list of the positive things that we gain from learning and then somehow lead to my thesis(which is very simple and generic right now).

Also i need 2 or 3 more points to write about to meet the pages requirement, but i don't know what else to write about. So far i have written about

phychological
finding out what you believe wasn't true (allegory of the cave)
loss of beauty , for example an english teacher cant enjoy reading as much as he use to because he is always criticizing or looking for run ons, errors, etc

social
pretending to be something your not to" fit in" ex. talking less educated or pretending to be ignorant to not look like a geek in front of your friends

Thanks in advance, i really need help with my intro

Penasteph07 3 / 11  
Sep 13, 2010   #2
Try to write the body of the essay, look at the points you covered, and then go back to the thesis.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,335 129  
Sep 16, 2010   #3
I've been staring at my computer screen for like the last 2 hours . --- I sympathize! I know what you mean...

I have to write a paper on how an education destroys while it contructs. I need to analyze the painful phychological and disruptive social effects of learning. ----- google these things:

Pink Floyd We don't need no education analysis -- I think you'll get great ideas.
Seeking knowledge every day something acquired wisdom dropped tao ----- check out the verse of the tao te ching.

Im really struggling with my intro, for some reason i always struggle with my intro when ever i write an essay and i always feel like i need to it before i move on. This time i actually manage to write three paragraphs, but i cant stop thinking about my intro.---- forget the intro. If you were going on stage to talk to lots of people, would you want to be introduced by someone who does not know you? No, you would want to be introduced by someone who knows you, so write the essay before writing the intro. Write the intro last, after you know the essay well.

Can you find 5 excellent articles? If you read 5 relevant articles, this will be easy, because you can give a paragraph to each and then draw a thoughtful conclusion based on the collection of ideas you have with all their articles.


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