ritared 2 / 5 1 Jan 24, 2013 #1What contributes to an enjoyable vacation? The answer probably varies from person to person. As for me, an ideal vacation should make me feel relax, and give me unforgettable memories. To fulfill both the requirements, a good friend to travel with is an indispensable part of a trip.I feel "To fulfill both the requirements" is far from perfect. How can I link the two sentence more naturally? Please~
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592 Jan 24, 2013 #2Guess this is for a speaking task :)should make me feel relaxshould make me feel relaxedI feel "To fulfill both the requirements" is far from perfect. How can I link the two sentence more naturally? Please~A good friend can satisfy both these requirements. So, travelling with a friend would certainly make my vacation more enjoyable than doing it on my own.Hope this helps :)
OP ritared 2 / 5 1 Jan 24, 2013 #3Actually it is the first paragraph of my writing task. Thank you for your advice. It provide me with some new ideas.