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Is Hamlet a "noble hero"? / Thesis on Hamlet


sabonator 1 / 7  
Jan 25, 2013   #1
Is this an "okay" thesis to go with for my Hamlet essay?

Hamlet should not be considered a "noble hero", because of his lack of alacrity and prolonging his revenge on Claudius. Instead, he wastes time in prolonging his revenge on Claudius. Because of this, a few more people suffer and die. Hamlet's lack of confidence results in chaos and suffering.

Please give some criticism!! I'm not the best when it comes to writing essays.
OP sabonator 1 / 7  
Jan 25, 2013   #2
oh god i screwed up... Please ignore the repetitive line "Instead, he wastes time in prolonging his revenge on Claudius". It wasnt meant to be there :S
jkjeremy - / 380 72  
Jan 25, 2013   #3
So...what you meant was this:

Hamlet should not be considered a "noble hero", because of his lack of alacrity and prolonging his revenge on Claudius. Because of this, a few more people suffer and die. Hamlet's lack of confidence results in chaos and suffering.

?

If so, it's still too long.

You could write separate essays about any one of several ideas you've put forth here.

Would you mind posting the essay question?
OP sabonator 1 / 7  
Jan 25, 2013   #4
yeah... thats what I meant...
jkjeremy - / 380 72  
Jan 25, 2013   #5
Here's your thesis:

By no means can Hamlet be considered a noble hero.
OP sabonator 1 / 7  
Jan 25, 2013   #6
But isnt that a bit too short??
jkjeremy - / 380 72  
Jan 25, 2013   #7
Why would you say that?

It does what a thesis is supposed to do: it answers the essay question in a general way.

Some teachers incorrectly give other instructions.

What did he or she say?
OP sabonator 1 / 7  
Jan 25, 2013   #8
I should state my opinion, along with a supporting fact.
jkjeremy - / 380 72  
Jan 25, 2013   #9
I've never heard of such a thing.

Facts are the evidence you use in the body of your essay.

Facts SUPPORT your thesis.
OP sabonator 1 / 7  
Jan 25, 2013   #10
I know...but my teacher's weird... He wants me to have a supporting fact to go along with why I think Hamlet should not be considered a noble being.
jkjeremy - / 380 72  
Jan 25, 2013   #11
When's the essay due?
OP sabonator 1 / 7  
Jan 25, 2013   #12
Next week on friday
jkjeremy - / 380 72  
Jan 25, 2013   #13
Have you written anything else yet?
OP sabonator 1 / 7  
Jan 25, 2013   #14
so far just a few supporting facts..
jkjeremy - / 380 72  
Jan 25, 2013   #15
Stop agonizing over the thesis.

You'll do the introduction last.

I need the essay question in your teacher's words.
Bape95 2 / 3  
Jan 26, 2013   #16
It is short but I like this. But you should talk about why Hamlet hate Claudius and King Hamlet.


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