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Essay on: "I am very happy to meet my mother for the first time"


alwin 2 / 1  
Mar 18, 2009   #1
got the 5th essay the third month -_- how hardworking my teacher is @@

creative essay witting : i am very happy to meet my mother for the first time.

i have to begin my essay like this. can and mods give me some idea pls ????

i am really blank -_-
newsha31 19 / 75  
Mar 18, 2009   #2
i have a few ideas i hope it helps;
1) it can be from the view point of a new born baby. if you start is this way you can write about the deep relationship between the mother and baby before birth. like the way the baby could hear her/his mother talk to him and now he/she is excited to see him. you can also write about the world before birth too -you can make one. like before the baby comes to this world they promise him some one that will take care of him/her... and they tell him/her that person is called mom

2)it can be about someone who hasnt met his/her mom, because she's been in jail. lol, crazy idea.
3)it can be about some one who has died and has never seen his mom in real world because she has passes away giving him birth, but now that he's dead he can finally see her.

hope it helps ya. ;)
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Mar 19, 2009   #3
Is it to be a story you make up, then? It is always good to base your fiction on some facts.. all good writers do it. They base their fiction on a real story from their lives, at least a little. For example, Stephen King writes about Maine, because he knows Maine.

I happen to have been adopted, and I met my biological mom when I was 25... so I could do this easily! But I wonder if you can imagine a story in which someone grew up without a Mom. Stephen King advises us to think of a "What if" situation in order to come up wit good stories. What is a boy was a foster child because society thought his mom was dead, but actually she just faked her death and moved to another country because she could not handle motherhood. And then she tries to find you when she is full of regret... and she expects you to feel angry, but you are not angry at all. Perhaps you have become a modern-day stoic, and you are not angry, but you have almost no emotion at all. And your mother is a martial artist, and the two of you open a resturaunt that is routinely harassed by neighborhood thugs...
EF_Sean 6 / 3,491  
Mar 19, 2009   #4
Is this suppose to be a realistic story, one that really could have happened to you? Or can it be any sort of story? If it can be any genre, you can have some real fun. What if its the year 3000 and you were born in a lab, so your "mother" is the technician that mixed your DNA?
newsha31 19 / 75  
Apr 2, 2009   #5
hey what did u do? what did u write about?
1s2a3s 2 / 4  
Apr 5, 2009   #6
Pay close attention to detail, and description here - really try and use imagery and send the reader into a world of colours, sounds, tastes, sights, as maybe a baby would be growing up...it's a CREATIVE essay so - get creative, talk about crying and the strange emotions, the turmoil and the curiosity of interacting with life! Good luck


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