pinks1026 8 / 3 Sep 29, 2008 #1I am working on an introduction. it needs to be long and catchy. I think what i have right now is a "contrast" type introduction. i need your help in developing it pls. here is what i have so far..Having a good job does not seem to happen to many people especially for their first job. A lot of workers today are working but does not like what they are doing at all. Looking for a decent nice job does not come to everyone very easily. I felt very lucky to be not part of those many people. I was fortunate that I loved my first job, and I consider it the best. It was an easy job, has a good pay and nice workplace.
EF_Team5 - / 1,586 Sep 30, 2008 #2Good morning.As you did not include the prompt or assignment with the post, I can edit what you have for grammar and mechanics only:"Having a good job does not seem to happen to many people, especially for their first job. A lot of workers today are working but do not like what they are doing at all. Looking for a decent nice job does not come to everyone easily . I felt very lucky to be not part of those many people. I was fortunate that I loved my first job, and I consider it the best. It was an easy job, paid a decent wage, and was a nice workplace."Regards,GloriaModerator, EssayForum.com
OP pinks1026 8 / 3 Sep 30, 2008 #3hello gloria,thank you for that.the prompt will be, i need to make an introductory paragraph, about 10 sentences. The intro should have a common method (like a warm-up before my topic sentence). The methods are either..broad statementcontrastrelevanceanecdotequestion orquotationI think that what i am doing is a contrast method. I started with an opposite idea of the topic that I will develop. I started with many people having bad jobs, but in fact my topic would be me having my best job.thank you