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My short, long and personal goals I have.


chocolateapples 1 / 1  
Sep 3, 2012   #1
hi guy,i need help writing my goals paper any help?

It has been three years since I first stepped into the hallways of West Henderson High. Over the years, I have learned that the road to success in high school can be rough at times. Having to balance my social life with schoolwork was hard for me in the beginning but I overcame those odds to accomplish many goals in my high school life. In this analysis of the goals I have accomplished over the years, the two points looked at will be the classes I was and now are presently enrolled.

My high school experience has been one of many choices being made. Throughout these past three years I have had to make many choices, many of which have impacted my relationship with my friends, teachers,coaches and now career choices.

There are so many goals that I have and that I want to accomplish. The main reason my number one goal is to become a doctor is my mother is in the health field, a nurse. During my childhood, she would tend to take me with her to her work, and random clinches, hospitals, and offices. Watching my mother and seeing her helping others really influenced me to want to go into the health field like her. Seeing the people who were sick and ill made me sympathetic. This motivated me to want to help others. Every time I get that change to help others, I get a feeling of accomplishment and gratification from helping others. Also I'm interested in sciences and math it helps me with my career in becoming an doctor . My career goals after high school are to get into a good college where I can become a successful student. After college I want to graduate with a doctrine degree and become a doctor , or something else that I might be interested in the future. The reason I'm interested in this career is because I like working with people and helping them. I'm a very social person so I think this will be a good career for me because I'll be able to meet different people. Learning about this career will help me decide if this is a career for me.

Being a doctor and college are all my long term goals, but I also have short term goals too and one personal goal. My personal goal is selfishness. It's a large motivator I have when it comes to my personal goal. Instead of wondering what an individual can get out of a situation, they should be wondering how they can help others. When a person helps other they meet their physical and emotion need. Helping others also brings compassion and compassion equals a better society. As for myself I would like to become a doctor to make an impact on each individual patient's life. The main short goals are obviously school related because that's where I spend most of my time, and it is a stepping stone toward my long term goals. For the last year I have in high school, I want to bring my GPA, study better for classes and actually answer questions in class because I know what my teacher is talking about. For the less academic things I would like to accomplish would be to; hang out with friends, spend time with my family, and getting more involved with sports and church.

I hope that from reading this you get a good understanding how my dedication to school work can accomplish many goals in a person's high school years.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Sep 4, 2012   #2
Can you post the prompt? So that we can see whether your answer is well aligned with it. Is it about the goals that you have already achieved or your future goals?
OP chocolateapples 1 / 1  
Sep 4, 2012   #3
The prompt was: What are goals you plan to achieve these next few years.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Sep 4, 2012   #4
In this analysis of the goals I have accomplished over the years, the two points looked at will be the classes I was and now are presently enrolled.

If that is so, by saying " the goals I have accomplished over the years" misleads the reader. That's why I got confused whether you are asked to tell how your past goals have been achieved. Better present the above sentence differently.
amitt - / 80  
Sep 4, 2012   #5
"The main reason my number one goal is to become a doctor is my mother is in the health field, a nurse." check this sentence.

"This motivated me to want to help others." check this sentence
Every time I get that change to help others, I get check this sentence
When a person helps other they meet their physical and emotion need. check this sentence
Please, be careful while structuring the sentences
Thanks
pramuditha - / 1  
Sep 26, 2012   #6
bad it means you are very bad
blaze321 4 / 5  
Sep 26, 2012   #7
is this essay talking about past goals?


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