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Latifa 1 / -  
Jan 25, 2014   #1
My third good trait is imaginative. In my opinion imagination is ambition and passion for an idea, imagine and dream about it until we find the way to turn it into reality in the right moment.For example : I always imagine that i have international hotel with my unique and out of ordinary touch like the interior design also the outer shape of the hotel and because, I believe in myself and in my capabilities, as long as I have determination i am sure that my dream will become true.
Aliehs13 1 / 4  
Jan 25, 2014   #2
For example: I've always imagined that I owned an international hotel .
You should start a new sentence. Also, the outer...
I believe in myself and what I am capable of
Dream will come true not become true
And also, capitalize your "I"
sntinn 8 / 36 9  
Jan 26, 2014   #3
In my opinion imagination is ambition and passion for an idea,imagine and dream about it until we find the way to turn it into reality in the right moment.

This sentence should be separated into two sentences.
In my opinion imagination is ambition and passion for an idea.
We imagine and dream about it until we find the way to turn it into reality in the right moment.


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