Othello by william shakespeare
Thesis: Othello is a fool and jealous man who couldn't believe his fair and attractive wife.
I. Othello's outside looks strong and honest, but his internal side is a weak, and diffident.
A. His accomplishment shows that he is strong.
1. Because he has risen through the ranks of the Venetian army through his hard work and success in a battle.
2. And he is in great demand by the duke and senate, and he looks respected person.
B. Indeed, his vision is not good to see a far.
1. As a Mongolian proverb says, "In order for the jay birds to sit on the hill, you must first erect the hill." If Othello didn't provoke Iago, he couldn't be confronted his tragedy.
2. He couldn't see that his wife is a fair; besides, he kills his wife Desdemona by ransom of his weakness.
II. Desdemona is a smart and a strength woman who has capacity to fascinate others.
A. But she really loves her husband who is he.
B. She just wants to help Cassio who serves under Othello, because she is a sympathetic person.
III. Iago is a main character who controls the play, and he is someone who can admit himself.
A. Iago is able to manipulate others to do things in a way that benefits him and gets him closer to his goals.
1. Most characters are influenced by Iago such as Cassio, Roderigo, and Othello.
B. He can show who is Othello, and his weakness to others.
IV. If Othello has ability to see anything by other side, or his internal good outdoes his internal evil, all things would have been different, but he couldn't be like that. So Othello's sin against Desdemona is as heinous as Iago's sin against Othello.
Thesis: Othello is a foolish and jealous man who could not believe his fair and attractive wife.
I. Othello's outside looks strong and honest, but his internal side is weak and diffident.
A. His accomplishment shows that he is strong.
1. He has risen through the ranks of the Venetian army through his hard work and success in a battle.
2. He is in great demand by the duke and senate, and he is a respected person.
B. His vision does not allow him to see far.
1. As a Mongolian proverb says, "In order for the jay birds to sit on the hill, you must first erect the hill." If Othello didn't provoke Iago, he couldn't confront his tragedy.
2. He couldn't see that his wife is a fair; besides, he kills his wife Desdemona by ransom of his weakness.[This does not really make sense.]
II. Desdemona is a smart and a strong woman who has capacity to fascinate others.
A. But she really loves her husband as he is.
B. She just wants to help Cassio who serves under Othello, because she is a sympathetic person.
III. Iago is a main character who controls the play, and he is someone who can admit himself. [Can admit what to himself?]
A. Iago is able to manipulate others to do things in a way that benefits him and gets him closer to his goals.
1. Most characters are influenced by Iago such as Cassio, Roderigo, and Othello.
B. He can show who is Othello, and his weakness to others.
IV. Othello's sin against Desdemona is as heinous as Iago's sin against Othello.
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