I am going to tell you about my process of, learning how to read and write over the years.
Avoid writing this way. This is only applicable in speaking, specifically reporting. Think first of a good introduction: 1. it is the first paragraph 2. it should not be lengthy/long 3. it should have thesis statement or main topic. The other one is the body (another paragraph). Here it's time for you to elaborate your topic by presenting general statements with specific details supporting them. It should be longer than your intro, of course. The last paragraph is conclusion( how will you conclude/summarize it?). This is the structure which you don't apply in your posted essay. Follow this first.
At the time it was tough understanding the concept of reading and writing, because it was a language I did not understand.At that time it was difficult for me to understand the concept of reading and writing, because of the language used as a means of instruction.
A couple of years passed,
and my family decided to move on to the United States.
In the year 2006. There I stared attending a middle school named Ferndle.In the year 2006, there I started attending in a middle school named Ferndle.
I had ESL class, where they just showed
gave me picture books with plain pictures with not many words .