"The Simpsons" - help in paragraph homework

"The Simpsons" is a modern day show and is one of the most popular cartoon shows. It is even air on a prime time in a big network before another popular show. However, just because it is a cartoon show it doesn't mean that it is always appropriate for kids. The Simpsons portrays a family with awful morals and terrible manners. The program conveys inappropriate acts such as cursing, shouting, stealing, cheating, gambling, disrespecting adults and many more. The list can go on forever and even though it is rated for teens and adults, parents sometimes don't really supervise what their kids are watching. Kids may think that just because it is funny it is also okay for them to do such things. Kids today sometimes imitate what they see on television and watching "The Simpsons" is not a good example.

HELP IN DEVELOPING IT. PLEASE
TEACHER ASKED US TO DO A PARAGRAPH WITH ANY OF OUR CHOICE. I CHOSE THIS BECAUSE I THINK THAT IT IS EASY TO TALK ABOUT. I DON'T WANNA PROJECT THAT THE SHOW ITSELF IS BAD(but i think i did) I ALSO WANT TO EXPRESS THAT IT IS ALSO UP TO THE PARENTS TO GUIDE THEIR KIDS. (not just the simpsons, there are worsts like Family Guy and Southpark). ALSO I WANT MY GRAMMAR TO BE CORRECT AS WELL NOT ONLY THE IDEAS. THANKS

Good morning!

Well, with the essay only being a paragraph long, your sentences need to be clearly developed and stated; you will only have about 8 to work with.

You could start it by stating your opinion (the Simpsons is bad, but there are worse shows?) then follow up by providing 4-5 sentences giving specific examples of why you think this (i.e. you could include a summary of one episode of each show), and then one sentence for your conclusion.

I hope this helps give you some ideas.

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Gloria
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