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I have to do a thesis 4pg. paper on the atomic bomb



vikingwrestler 1 / -  
Feb 14, 2008   #1
i really dont know what to think of as a thesis statment ,what to prove?
i have all the information but its just i need a kick start,im not really good at writing or starting a paper but thanks

EF_Team2 1 / 1703  
Feb 15, 2008   #2
Greetings!

A thesis statement can sound like a rather intimidating chore, but think of it this way: what is your paper really about? What point does it want to prove? For example, here are a couple of different approaches for a paper on the atomic bomb:

"In 1945, a new force was unleashed which may have doomed the human race to orchestrating its own extinction."

"In 1945, a new force was unleashed which ended a world war and gave birth to the potential creation of a balance of power that will keep rogue nations in check."

It really depends which direction you want your essay to lean. Do a little research on the creation of the atomic bomb and see what angle appeals to you. Once you have a rough draft of your first paragraph, I'd be happy to start helping you shape and edit it.

Thanks,

Sarah, EssayForum.com
helpme23 - / 1  
Mar 11, 2012   #3
Atomic Bomb Paper - Why Was The Bomb Dropped? - How Do I Begin My Essay???

I have to write an essay on why the atomic bomb was dropped. I Have all these books but i dont know where to begin. I know exactly what I want to say I just dont know how to put it in writing. How do i start my thesis statement? How do I Begin my first paragraph? Help??
chalumeau /  
Mar 11, 2012   #4
Don't start with your thesis. Write several paragraphs from different viewpoints first.
You will find your thesis afterwards. You may have to delete entire paragraphs, but
your essay will be better in the end.

It's daunting to start something that has been so well documented over the years.
It's the scariest part I think.


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