lylreaganmac 4 / 8 4 Sep 13, 2016 #1So I am rewriting and starting from scratch for my Fashion Institute of Technology admissions essay and I need a good lead in sentence. I want to show my personality a bit and make it stand out. Again this is just the first sentence but I always struggle with the beginnings.I could have never imagined that my plans for the rest of my life would flourish after discovering the Fashion Institute of Technology through a Pretty Little Liars episode.-I could never have imagined that all of my plans for my future would do a 180 and flourish after watching a Pretty Little Liars episode.-I could have never imagined that all of my plans for my future would be modified all because of one Pretty Little Liars episode.-I could have never imagined that the fate of my future rested in the hands of the writers for the show Pretty Little Liars.I am not sure which one is best but also I'm not sure if it is a bad choice. This is my first admissions essay and I'm not sure what is the best option.
TJLuschen - / 241 203 Sep 13, 2016 #2I like the last one best. Unfortunately I have no idea what Pretty Little Liars is or how it could relate to your career decision.