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The most UNFORGETABLE experience occured when you're at primary school~


hunhann 6 / 23  
Apr 28, 2015   #1
Actually I don't have any special experience about this
I just have a story to tell that I moved from a village school to a school in town when I had finished my 3rd year in pri.school for the reason that I was a good student.

That is the most difficult thing.
I want you to do me a favor: LIST ME THE ADVANTAGES OF MOVING SCHOOL.
That's all
Thanks a lot <3
lcturn87 - / 435 236  
Apr 28, 2015   #2
Here is my suggestion:
1) Sometimes we don't have a story to tell or have vague memories about our experiences in primary school. However, you still have a story to tell.

2) Finishing your third year because you were a good student is a good experience. How did you achieve this? Did moving from a village school to a school in town help? For example, you may move to a school and the subjects seem easier. It could be because of the teacher or maybe the school system you were in was more advanced.

3) Also, an unforgettable experience could involve the friendships you made. How did friendships help you grow as a person? This is also a part of your growth and development in primary school. You begin to have social interactions that help you throughout life.

4) Did you have different experiences in the village school in comparison with the school in town. Maybe you went on more field trips in the village school or town.

Take some time and brainstorm. Choose one experience and try to capture as may details as possible. I don't know how long the essay should be, but if you attempt to tell your story in an honest, heartfelt way it will come through in your writing.
OP hunhann 6 / 23  
Apr 30, 2015   #3
Thanks but I still have something to ask you.
That experience I mean is moving school but your idea is including a clear experience: friends or something else,....
Should I write it clearly or tell some with that experience ???
Anyway, Thank you one more time ^^
kibz95 16 / 53 15  
Apr 30, 2015   #4
Advantages of moving school huh...
Being forced to move overseas when I was 5 and then again forced to come back during my teenage years, I have a lot of personal... things I could tell about moving schools.

Sadly, most of them are bad... It's not easy moving environments no matter how smart, good-looking, or talented you are. It takes time and patience for you to accept this new place and for the new place to accept you. In fact, the bad points of moving schools are probably twice as much as the good points.

BUT, I'll admit there are various benefits in moving schools.
1. Do things differently you used to. Basically a new start, be what you wanted to be as long as you have the determination and ability to do so.

2. Your circle of friends greatly increases. That's an obvious one, you're in a different place, of course you'll meet more people. In a way, your facebook friends and twitter followers might increase... so benefit, yeah?

3. More connection with teachers. This is really similar to number two, but the feeling is different whenever you talk to them. For me personally, I wanted to learn about US college when I returned in my home country but none of the teachers here know anything about US college so I had connections for advice which really helped.

4. You can make up wacky stories without proof. This is a fact. I used it myself. If people are from a different place, others wish to listen what you did, what it felt, and the events you had or participated in that place. Without anybody really knowing what happened, you can just make up stories to humor them or intrigue them. But really, no obvious lies that people can find out. Simple minor details just to spice stories up.

5. If you moved schools overseas, especially schools where the language is different, you can impress others or attend special programs regarding that language to score additional points in your application for college.

Hope this helps. I would appreciate it if you'd take a look at my essays~ Thanks~
OP hunhann 6 / 23  
May 1, 2015   #5
oh~~~~~~~~~~
thanks but I just moved from village to town not overseas.
Anyway these help me much
Thanks again


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