starberrypie 1 / - Feb 8, 2010 #1How should I word this thesis statement about the environment? Please don't make it sound too complicated and fancy like, I might not be able to understand!
jen50192 4 / 37 Feb 9, 2010 #2The environment is a very large topic...What about the environment are you writing for?Keep in mind, people can give you suggestions but not actually write for you!
alina967 11 / 29 Feb 9, 2010 #4Do you have any specific issue on environment?bcs.bedfordstmartins.com/conciseguide5e/default.asp?s=&n=&i=&v=&o=&ns=0&uid=4993928&rau=4993928This is a link of a book. It is free for student account. See last chapter if it can help.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129 Feb 10, 2010 #5The thesis statement should say something that is not too obvious. Don't write "Governments of developed nations need to reduce their harmful emissions in order to protect the environment." It is too general and obvious.You should read 5 articles, and see if you learn something you did not know before. When you learn something you did not know before, write a sentence about it, and post it here. we will tell you if it is a good thesis statement.google this: how to write a good thesis statement about environment... and you will get a lot of good ideas!