It would be great for you to receive help through this forum. You could have your essay checked for grammar issues, meaning, etc. Everyone works diligently to help each student with his or her work. What I try to do for student's paper is put quotes around the sentences that I correct. It is just to ensure that this work is the student's work that has been corrected.
However, I would encourage anyone to write their own essay. It helps to improve your writing skills when you have written your own thoughts. Also, I would just like to state that sometimes there are posts in which someone may need help getting started with research. This forum would be a great place to start to help you with those types of assignment.
Hello I will no longer post on your threads unless it is to help with your work but I had one serious question
if I posted my admission essay on here will it show up as plagiarism in the colleges eyes?
I did this on college confidential and they said to redo my essays because their programs will find this and label it plagarized and I will get rejected
sorry I am new to this and really made a mistake by putting it up here
can i have your email/work ID's so that I can mail my essay for a review? i really dont want people to copy my ideas or plaigarism suspections from my uni (i will mail it to trusted people here only as i realize people might create a fake account to get my essay)