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SOP: Asian Studies M.A. for Andrea Gill

4 - hyphen: wide-eyed curiosity river's You don't have to capitalize professor when you are not using it...

Graduatelilliloli - Jun 30, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jul 3, 2010
SOP for admission in Ph. D. program in Mechanical Engineering at Canada

6 - Thank you, Andrea. That was a small but important mistake....

Graduatetotallamp - Jun 25, 2010 / totallamp - Jun 30, 2010
Academic Statement of Purpose for PhD program of Chemical Engineering

5 - Thank you! I'll try to improve the essay as you said!...

Graduatejdn2001cn - Jun 24, 2010 / jdn2001cn - Jun 27, 2010
Letter of Application to Graduate School Rehabilitative Counseling program

6 - Jestina and Ershad, thanks for your work. You really gave some sincere feedback. Christine, you have a nice...

Graduateccmahamm - Jun 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jun 25, 2010
Personal Statement : MSc in Strategic Marketing

3 - Hi, Thank you so much for the help! I revise it all your comments and I am sure...

GraduateRITABATALHA - Jun 20, 2010 / RITABATALHA - Jun 22, 2010
My love story with computers; Personal statement/Computer science

2 - I think you can omit the first sentence and directly go from "when I was 7 years old...". Also,...

GraduateShixo - Jun 19, 2010 / thni - Jun 21, 2010
SOP for geoenvironmental engineering at cardiff university

3 - PeaceEarth and Kevin, thank you for your feedback! i ll correct my mistakes....

Graduategny - Jun 16, 2010 / gny - Jun 17, 2010
SOP Msc Manufacturing management Bradford University.

2 - ...found a course that comprised of not only all the engineering but also the management in Bradford University for...

GraduateKene - Jun 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jun 17, 2010
Sustainable Energy Systems advanced studies course

3 - Thank you for your availability. Congratulations true community service in essayFórum....

GraduatePCoelho - Jun 11, 2010 / PCoelho - Jun 14, 2010
"give an objective description of yourself including your strengths & weaknesses"

9 - it is a very well apllicationan. all the mistakes was coreected by nesreen. hope you win. ;DDD...

GraduateZeinab1383 - Jun 9, 2010 / Mizo Metallic - Jun 13, 2010
Essay on"your career plans & how this programme will help you attain your goals?"

8 - EF_Kevin Thank you Kevin....

GraduateZeinab1383 - Jun 1, 2010 / Zeinab1383 - Jun 12, 2010
tips for replying for first round selection

2 - Google this: thank you letter example I think the best strategy is to be genuinely purposeful. There are...

Graduateanchu - Jun 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jun 10, 2010
Personal Statement for Physician Assistant (what motivates me)

6 - Paul this is a very interesting discussion you gave here. Thanks, we are lucky to have you participating....

Graduatekhan_kamila - May 31, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jun 9, 2010
Essay on Letter of Motivation for buiness school: the knowledge, confidence

2 - With five years of work experience in two if the world XXXXX industry's best companies -- YYYYYYYY and ZZZZZZZZ...

Graduatejavazen - Jun 6, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jun 7, 2010
Electronics Engineering: Statement of purpose communication in progress..

7 - You are welcome. Your question: What I am trying to do is carve out a theme for...

Graduateno1knowtome - May 31, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jun 7, 2010
Request to review statement of purpose(SOP) for PhD in Computer Science

2 - This occurred while reading a seemingly regular and now regarded a famous ordinary article by Herb Sutter that has...

Graduatevng - Jun 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jun 4, 2010
Peace Corps Application Essay #1, the most challenging expectation

4 - Yep, great advice here. I was thinking that the reader might favor applicants who have no doubt, and...

Graduatejp1705 - Jun 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jun 4, 2010
Statement Of Purpose in Msc Accounting and Finance Management

3 - I think "studied" is better than "took" But I also think you should add a sentence to the...

GraduateKarls Mtz - Jun 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jun 3, 2010
Master of Global Logistics: Application Essays; Career Goals, Skills and Talents

4 - Linmark, that's a very generous start you provided. When someone is feeling overwhelmed and unable to start, this is...

Graduatesunnyc463 - Jun 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jun 3, 2010
Perseverance, survival and cross-cultural sharing + Girl rescure - MBA Admissions

8 - Don't be sorry, that is what EF is made of! I think you should add one more...

Graduatebecnil - May 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 31, 2010
MBA Career Goals Essay: Transportation Engineer (Civil Service, Government)

10 - Hi Niladri, I moved your other essay to it's own thread. Just click "my threads" to find it....

Graduatebecnil - May 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 31, 2010
sop for phd materials and ores engineering

3 - Hello friend, what is the problem? Are you having trouble because your English is not very strong yet? ...

Graduaterafiushaikh - May 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 31, 2010
A strong connection between me and the field of engineering - sustainable energy systems MSc

4 - Although I am replying after a long period, i would like to thank you very much for yours answers...

Graduatejoseee1985 - Mar 29, 2010 / joseee1985 - May 31, 2010
Academic and career goal description for MS in comp science (correct or suggest)

3 - Academic goals and Career aspiration: ------------------------------------- - Learn, Teach, Influence technically, Lead and make difference. - Further academic learning...

Graduatediso81 - May 27, 2010 / becnil - May 28, 2010
SOP for PhD. in printing or specifically printed electronics - Feedback/Comments

4 - Nice!! That is good news for all of us essayforum.com/ef-contributor-page/...

Graduateetausif - May 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 27, 2010
"International MSc in Entrepreneurship Education & Training" application letter

7 - It's confusing in the beginning to list these various things. I suggest settling the reader's attention on a single...

GraduateZeinab1383 - May 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 27, 2010
Memorable event: When our college invited donations to build a new dorm

3 - Hi Kevin, Many thanks for yr valued suggestion & tks for helpful forum....

Graduatevkkhongtien - May 25, 2010 / vkkhongtien - May 26, 2010
One page essay explaining why you are requesting reevaluation

5 - Ha ha, yeah, I think nobody messes up the English language as much as I do in these threads......

Graduatejay11 - May 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 26, 2010
SOP for Master in Computer Science and Information Technology

4 - I was not sure what the computer could do when I was a child. I looke d at it...

GraduateDeme - May 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 24, 2010
MSc programme to support your career and personal development - how to answer it

8 - Thank you so much Kevin. And hey am really flattered....

Graduatea 100 hills - Apr 21, 2010 / a 100 hills - May 22, 2010
"a career in mental health, substance abuse" - Graduate Admission Statement help

3 - I often wandered wondered why I never said ... hen one day one of the girls asked me...

Graduatewade2466 - May 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 20, 2010
Questions on Goal Statement and Work Description Essay

5 - Kevin, Thank very much for your suggestions. I will work on your suggestions tonight. Khoivu...

Graduatekhoivu - May 17, 2010 / khoivu - May 19, 2010
SOP for electrical engineering (communications)

NEW - pls help review this SOP. i havent done a proper introduction yet. i plan to do it in the...

Graduateellesmera - May 15, 2010 / — -
Personal/job history; reason, career plans - One page intro for MBA class.

3 - ...with his mutt, Crakerjack. ---- I added a comma Capitalize Internet If you say you were outspoken...

Graduatekjneal - May 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 14, 2010
SOP for Master in Finance -including an assessment of my aptitude for this study

NEW - Hello everyone, It would be much appreciated if you could have a look at this and let me know...

Graduatethe_dude - May 13, 2010 / — -
SOP for MS in Mechanical Engineering: "justify your faith in me"

6 - Hi there! I think you have done some solid work with this essay, but I have some overarching...

Graduateviswes31 - May 3, 2010 / ivyeyesediting - May 10, 2010
MPH Statement, "health opportunities"

2 - Moreover, I think you should evoke an example in your career where you were involved in a volonteer organization...

Graduatetinkerbell84 - May 4, 2010 / frederic80 - May 9, 2010
Some people think that examinations have some bad effects on students. Ideas?

4 - This is really a good subject to discuss. As bad effects that examinations have, I can say: -on their...

Graduatekykyjason - May 5, 2010 / frederic80 - May 9, 2010
'petrol on the burning fire' - Statement of interest for graduation M-Engg program

14 - Questions about what study and profession? If you have questions about the essay posted in this thread, feel free...

Graduatevikas singh - Apr 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 8, 2010
Photographic preservation graduate school 500word essay

5 - I think you can draw an even subtler and more meaningful comparison -- both are composition, and composition...

Graduatecpark012 - May 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 6, 2010
Recommendation letter - master programme in architecture

3 - simplify: ...have had the chance to be Andrei Luca's [subject] professor during his undergraduate studies. I am writing you...

Graduatearhiandrei - May 5, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 6, 2010
"illiterate parents" -my PERSONAL STATEMENT for a MSc in Management at Bath Univ

4 - Well, yes, that means you have "room for improvement." Make it so that the reader learns one impressive detail...

Graduatea 100 hills - Apr 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 4, 2010
SOP for MA in Art Ed. Explain your purpose for graduate study

7 - Thanks guys!! I will take your comments and use them in my next draft. You help is Much appreciated....

Graduatemonboddie - Apr 30, 2010 / monboddie - May 2, 2010
SOP for English literature (Graduate, literary studies)

4 - What do you mean when you say I dropped it? I am googling around and don't see any of...

GraduateMasoud_A - Apr 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 1, 2010
'my career as a Visual Artist' - Statement of Purpose for Graphic Design Course

8 - haha you are welcome!! I hope you'll continue to participate here when you have time! :-)...

Graduatesweetjhanvi - Apr 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 30, 2010
PHD STATEMENT OF OBJECTIVES (sustainable technology development)

2 - Energy and sustainability nowadays is are inherent features in any industry... In this world with an increasing...

Graduatecit - Apr 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 28, 2010
"the beginning of my career in literature" my English Ph.D. statement of purpose

2 - You have a little awkwardness right at the start, here: "When I was 4, my mother tells me..." I...

Graduateklinden8 - Apr 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 27, 2010
Personal Statement for MSc in Petroleum Engineering

3 - My name is Ade Santoso, and I am Indonesian At 22 years of age, I graduated from University of...

Graduateadepura - Apr 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 27, 2010
significant experience working in a group - essay for Evening MBA UW

3 - you also should have a nice ending, like thank you for you consideration etc,...

Graduatevashwanth - Mar 31, 2010 / alibaba 1983 - Apr 26, 2010
An effort to make myself prominent..(Electrical Eng)

8 - Thank you for reviewing and your suggestions......

Graduatekawish - Apr 20, 2010 / kawish - Apr 26, 2010
Future career (business world) progress and why I chose it.

3 - Thank you a lot for your corrections! English is not my native language, so I appreciate a lot...

Graduateloukanast - Apr 24, 2010 / loukanast - Apr 26, 2010
Why MBA? Essay targetting MBA in finance.

5 - I was not sure about dashes(--) usage before, but now I see it is used for stronger punctuation. yeah,...

Graduatepsingh42 - Apr 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2010
Brandeis International Business School, International/cross-cultural experiences

5 - Kevin, Jonathan and Wang, this is really so very helpful.Thanks guys...

Graduatea 100 hills - Apr 2, 2010 / a 100 hills - Apr 21, 2010
essay of personal statement speech and language pathology

2 - Running a marathon: hurry up, slow down, pace yourself... what's next? That first paragraph needs at least one...

Graduatekiki - Apr 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2010
McGill M.Arch in "Cultural Mediation and Technology" - statement letter

9 - Nope, there is nothing you don't know, :-) Good luck, I hope you have a great experience waiting...

Graduateqqpp - Mar 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 20, 2010
'It wasn't a quick decision' - SOP for a Master Degree in Chemical Engineering part-time

6 - I remembered that I used to do some of the easy experiments in my home after school. --- this...

Graduatemgb - Apr 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 17, 2010
SOP for photography college -- capturing a moment

3 - ...because of some financial constraints, so after finishing my Masters in software engineering from one the well acclaimed and...

Graduateprachs - Apr 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 14, 2010
Statement of Purpose for MBA finance, an operation manager in a restaurant

5 - Thank you very much Kevin!...

Graduatekencao83 - Apr 7, 2010 / kencao83 - Apr 9, 2010
'Network Security' - Statement of Purpose for MS admission in USA (Computer science)

2 - During high school, I gained good knowledge of C++ programming language and Data Structures. (I think one more sentence...

Graduatemanubh - Apr 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 9, 2010
Admission Essay For Financial Engineering Masters Program

3 - Thank you very much Susan! Your corrections have really improved my essay and I have used it to...

Graduatedomycuzo - Apr 6, 2010 / domycuzo - Apr 8, 2010

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