- sleep by
- I vividly remember
ed( even with the action being in the past, use a present tense as you are narrating it ) the first
- I served as a home tutor
inon holiday to help make ends meet.
- Another thing
thethat hardship brought to me is
- the reflection
- My father regret
ted that he didn't
- If he has put efforts on
- However, the impact of this experience gave
to me never shade s with time.
There you have it Gujie, I hope my remarks and corrections helped,
what I notice on your essay is the verb form as well as the tenses of
the words you use, this is somehow a common mistake but it's always
good to be able to spot this differences.
Do let us know when you need further assistance.
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