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Cambodia Development - AAS Application: Why did you choose your proposed course


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Mar 2, 2021   #1

Q: Why did you choose your proposed course?


A: In Cambodia, people are living, eating, and growing up in the environment where solid waste is not well managed, the wastewater pollutant spreading around, clean water is difficult to access, and their lives are threatened by the impact of development projects that do not conduct environmental impact studies. We are facing the environmental problem and yet we cannot solve it by reason of lacking the knowledge and the technology. Cambodia is the developing country which really need to improve the infrastructure to meet the need of the future development, meanwhile, there are not many environmental experts working on environmental impact studies and this will be the dreadful actions to the environment. Within these problems, I choose the high standard curriculum of Australian Education about the environmental engineering and management which is going to enable me to develop environmental background, including theoretical depth and high practical relevance because tackling environmental issues requires concerted, coordinated government action as well as an informed and collaborative effort by individuals, with the higher knowledge and capacity to identify the potential risks of a project to environmental and human well-being, and identify measures to eliminate and mitigate these risks.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 14,767 4773  
Mar 2, 2021   #2
How does your proposed course relate, in a professional manner, to addressing the needs of Cambodia? You gave a definitive description of the waste management problem in the country, but you failed to relate that to the reasons why you chose to study Environmental Engineering in Australia. You did not indicate a university choice and relevant program of study, as it relates to your desire to improve your professional skills to help resolve the waste situation in your country.

I am afraid you will need to revise the whole essay. The current presentation is good, but lacking in proper reference points to address the why's of the prompt. A more solid focus on responding to the questions, while summarizing the need for waste management professionals in Cambodia would better suit the prompt discussion presentation.


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