The main reason why I have applied for this course is to gain right basics. All round knowledge shall help me to grow in better way. I want to learn every aspect which helps me in erudition of all creative sides of advertising. Throughout my education and carrier in design I have been greatly influenced by my teachers, colleagues and the culture surrounding me.
^I think you can do with removing this. It is fairly cliched and not particularly informative or convincing enough to make you a strong applicant for consideration, in my opinion.
I want to learn how to deal with advertising along with its marketing both with the creative and technical aspects of it. I would like to mention one of my personal experiences. I have done Diploma in Commercials Arts where we had to learn Principals of Design, Photography, Illustration, quick Sketches etc. almost the same subjects as in this course. While studying in college I was working with an art gallery too as Graphic Designer. Whatever I use to study in college I used to imply in my print work then. At times creating design by using Principles of Design like Isolation, Repetition and at times making quick Sketches and trying to look at same object with different angles and by clicking pictures and trying to put thoughts forward and it helped me in a way. I got practical experience and the gallery was too benefited with implication of my certain ideas.
^First sentence is practical. You can d with removing the second sentence however.
I dont see how you acn ''ímply'''your studies.
How do these experiences relate to your course though? Id advise making the connection stronger and suggest how you can transfer any skills you have developed to the course you are applying for.
As a freelancer too at times I could easily connect with the product and its target audiences because I now had an inspiration as how to create ideas from what I learned. So If I was studying Diploma course in common which helped me to grow then I wonder if I specialized in Graphic Design course, only then I think there are tones of opportunity for me to grow big and bigger.
^I do not quite understand the point you are making in the second sentence.
I also think that one should have complete knowledge of what he does and by studying this course it will help me to gain good knowledge about the use of Graphic Design in a particular better way. Once I have the knowledge and understanding I can communicate and advertise in predictable and fruitful way. Particularly visual and social communication of a result-oriented type can really work wonders to generate ideas and solve problems. As I have seen that the potential for creative output, the quality of the initial idea and thinking behind it assumes greater importance.
^Your first sentence is just a generalization and misuses pronouns.
Knowledge and understanding...of what?
communicate and adverstise...what?
A fairly unclear paragraph.
Last but not the least to be on the top of the chart master techniques quick brain game is needed which comes from studying the course and thus College-name. The College-name is a well established institution for the Arts, and studying there will not only give me the strong foundation and creative insight that I am looking to learn on the course but also improve my credentials as a visual artist and designer. Since it is part of the College-name, interactions with recognized designers during courses, workshops and critiques will provide opportunities that I will not possibly enjoy in other art schools. And also being located in London, one of the most vibrant and influential cities makes it an even better choice for choosing CollegeName for my Graphic Design course.
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On top of a graphics chart???
how is a well established instituion?
your last sentence needs grammar revision.
I am assuming that you are applying to the Central Arts of London in that case.
I suggest being more specific about your graphics course and how you expect to benefit from the course , how you are suited for the program and Uni, and why you feel that you should study there.