I am interested in pursuing a career in Computer Science and Engineering. I am very excited about this major because it is a unique mix of Computer Science, Sciences, Mathematic, and Engineer. From my research I am interested in the software engineering and computer-aided design (CAD); besides that I am interested in the system and networking and computer graphic also. To help you understand my goals, I would like to introduce my background and my education experience up to this point.
When I was young I did not know exactly what I wanted to study, but I did know that I loved to solve mathematics and physics problems or fix everything, and I do not give up until I got the result that I wanted. For instance, my electronic toy car, I played it until it broken then I took it off piece by piece and tried to fix it and put back together; it worked, but not too long. Every time I solved the problem, I learned new knowledge and improved my skills. Also, I see my cousin studied to becomes an Industrial Engineer, so that is the reason why I chose to study the Industrial Engineering at ABC University in Bangkok, Thailand at that time.
During my second-third, and fourth years of university, I had a chance to study computer languages, computer-aided design (CAD), computer-aided manufacturing (CAM) programs, computer numerical control (CNC), Auto Cad program for 2D and 3D, and Solid work program. Those courses taught me about languages such as C and HTML in computer languages, how to write G- code on CNC, drawing 2D and 3D picture by using AutoCAD, and Solid work programs. That made me more interested about the computer field because I wanted to know more about what the amazing computer programs can do and I would like to create my own program like Mark Zuckerberg who created Facebook. He inspired me want to study computer science engineer because from his work for Facebook can create connection and relationship for all people in the world. Also, I saw the story that mother and son who have been missing for 30 years can meet each other again because of Facebook.
During undergraduate life, I loved to participate in the Computer Club and the Health Club of the university. In the computer club, I learned the new programs such as Photoshop and Illustrator programs it is so fun and very amazing how they write these software programs to do so many things for many industry, It change the world big time. In the healthy club, I learned how to take care of myself more by eating less sugar, soda, and by exercising more. I enjoy participating in team sports such as badminton team, volley ball team. Both clubs taught me about communication, team work, and understanding people that come from different backgrounds. Also, my human relationship skills were improved. These skills are important for an engineer to develop.
Furthermore, I do believe that top of everything in the world is the technology and the best technology can lead the world to the better living life in planet. The highest technology must come from computer science engineer indeed and everything about technology and knowledge is need computer science engineer for sure; I want to be a part of world technology, part of the better living life.
I have chosen to apply for the Computer science and Engineering Program at XYZ for my graduate studies because they have outstanding professors that have high skill about this field; XYZ is extensively recognized in Thailand for the excellent academic quality, and it is well known to appreciate international students.
After completing my Master Degree in Computer Science and Engineer, I would like to bring the knowledge and techniques in the graduate program at XYZ teach students in Thailand as much as I can that it will help the student in Thailand have a different resource of education and develop the mechanism of small and big computer community in Thailand as well such as the way new student will entrance into university, I would like to make change for the system by using computer programs improve the admission system for get into the university in Thailand by change from paper application to computer application and also can prevent some student that have connection with staff in university can get into the university without testing. It will be fair to every student if we use computer system for every application.
I look forward to being a student in Computer Science and Engineering at the XYZ.
Thank you
Pat
I'm assuming the prompt is USC?
determination is to prevent and safe people from diseases and sickness
To help you understand my goals, I would like to introduce my background and my education experience up to this point.
-- You need to work on this transition, its cheesy. Don't directly address the reader. What you could maybe say instead is "I came to this goal through my education in industrial engineering..."
to solve mathematics and physics problems or fix everything.
-- Or works here I guess but "and" sounds better.
I learned new knowledge and improved my skills.
-- gained?
various courses likewise mathematics
I took phatology class , anatomy, physiology, nutrition class
-- If you really want to say "class" you could try saying "I took classes in..."
It was impress me and want to study more about human and disease, what is the best solution to improve the health care provider, make healing faster and accurate, how to help people get well faster with technology and knowledge of engineering and do not have to rely on drugs.
-- This sentence is confusing, either cut it off after disease with a semicolon or period or reword it.
It is so surprise me that now a dayto do surgery do not need to cut long wound it is just a small tiny hole enough for light and tools then doctor can operate the patient and less time in hospita l, I do believe that BME is very helping human and animal in the world to have the best quality of life and wellness
-- I think I know what you're trying to say at the green part, but your missing a subject and you need a comma. End the sentence after "hospital."
I do believe that BME is very helping human and animal
That is what I see and it is very urge me to research
