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Cultures of West and East; SOP in Entrepreneurship (study plan)


stan830 1 / 3  
Aug 10, 2010   #1
HI... I hope everyone can check on my statement of purpose..THX

Really appreciate!!!!

MSc in Entrepreneurship study plan

Nowadays, there are more and more people who have a great idea then want to set up their own business, but they are usually failed because lack of professional methods.

In my country, Taiwan, as we all know, Taiwan has similar culture with China, and it is located very close to China, where is the world's biggest market. Thus, over the past ten years, China is fulled of Taiwanese entrepreneurs who wants to take a chance on. However, in my opinion, it is really difficult to set up a healthy profit firm without particular knowledge. Therefore, it is necessary to equip myself with this professional master program of MSc in Entrepreneurship.

From 2004 to 2008, I was studied Tourism at XXXX University in Taiwan. When I studied in college I learnt not only the academic courses but intern experiences in hospitality field almost four years, such as, travel agency, hotel and restaurants; The last year in college, students have to write the graduate dissertation with teamwork and give a presentation to all the professor. My dissertation's topic is " A Study Of Domestic Tourism Resources- Choice And Preference Of College Students In Taipei. " .

By doing so, I was more understanding the process of writing the dissertation. On the other hand, I did well at all my internship and made lots of friend from the different fields. And the internship made me more understood that the academic theory which is taught in class should combine with practice.

In fact, I avoided some theoretic mistakes when I operated my own restaurant. For instance, in 2009, when I operated the restaurant I was finding out it was wrong to calculate the cost of food by using the methods in the textbooks, because each kind of situation has it's different method which is more suitable; and the most important is that those methods will change by the time.

During college, I was glad to find my aspiration is to run business in the field of hospitality. Thus, after I graduated from college, I tried to find an opportunity to run my own business. In 2008, because the financial storm, there was tough time for the whole world, but I still set up my first company " Magic beans of Jack CO. " to submitted a bid for the contract to operate the staff restaurant in the Chinatrust Financial Holding Co.

As a consequence, in 2009, I was concentrated on manging the restaurant and controlling the cost of the restaurant. During this period, I figured out if I do not have the professional knowledge to find a new adventure in this field I would not expend my business to the other country. As a result, in the end of 2009, I decided to close my restaurant and prepared to go abroad to the UK, because in the UK I will not only study the professional knowledge and skill but learn the difference culture between the west and the east.

Thanks for ur reading !!!

Zubaida 18 / 35  
Aug 10, 2010   #2
China is fulled offilled with Taiwanese entrepreneurs who want to take a chance on.

I was concentrated on managing the restaurant and controlling...

restaurants. T he last year in college, students have to write the graduate dissertation with teamwork and give a presentation to all the professors .

I hope this will help.
Good Luck
OP stan830 1 / 3  
Aug 10, 2010   #3
I really appreciate!!

Zubaida, thanks ur help !!!
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,335 129  
Aug 11, 2010   #4
...but they usually fail because they lack professional methods.

Entrepreneurship--- great choice!!

From 2004 to 2008, I was studied Tourism at XXXX University in Taiwan. When I studied in college I learnt not only from the academic courses but also from internship experiences in hospitality field over the course of four years, such as travel agency, hotel and restaurants. T he last year in college, students have had to write a graduate dissertation with teamwork and give a presentation to all the professors. My dissertation's topic was, "A Study Of Domestic Tourism Resources - Choice And Preference Of College Students In Taipei. "--- interesting!!

By doing so, I more gained more understanding of the process of writing the dissertation.

As a consequence, in 2009 I was concentrating on managin g the restaurant and controlling ...

very impressive!!
OP stan830 1 / 3  
Aug 12, 2010   #5
EF_Kevin, Really thanks ur help !!!

but I have a question...

Should I make more accurate information to support my opinion?

Like this ...

Nowadays, there are more and more people who have a great idea then want to set up their own business, but they are usually failed because lack of professional methods. In my country, Taiwan, as we all know, Taiwan has similar culture with China, and it is located very close to China, where is the world's biggest market in the feature ( According to the prediction from Credit Suisse in 2010: the proportion of China's expenditure of the world will exceed the figure for the America's expenditure of the world in 2020 ) . < sorry, I make a mistake before XD >

Thus, over the past twenty years, China is filled with Taiwanese entrepreneurs who want to take a chance on (according to the Ministry of Economic Affairs, Taiwan, the population is more than eight hundred thousands people ). However, in my opinion, it is really difficult to set up a healthy profit firm in the keen competitive situation but also without particular knowledge. Therefore, it is necessary to equip myself with this professional master programme of MSc in Entrepreneurship.

Should I add those info on ?

Thanks to u all again!!!
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,335 129  
Aug 14, 2010   #6
Here is a little correction:
Nowadays, there are more and more people who have a great idea and then want to set up their own business, but they are usually fail because of lack of professional methods.

This is a verb tense correction.
Thus, over the past twenty years, China is has been filled with Taiwanese entrepreneurs who want to take a chance on...

During this entire month, John has been doing well in school.
For 7 days, John has been coming home early.

And past tense is like this:
Last week, John came home early.
OP stan830 1 / 3  
Aug 21, 2010   #7
ha...
EF_Kevin thanks ur correction !!
I didn't check this article carefully, really thanks ur kindness!!!


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