kindly correct the following :The aerospace industry is at the forefront of innovation, pushing the boundaries of technological advancement at an exponential rate. The design and manufacture of air crafts that can defy the limits of the world, or go beyond the decree of nature, is arguably the pinnacle of engineering in the world today.
That is the main reason that I am interested in pursuing an Aeronautical Engineering Masters degree after having completed my Bachelor's degree in Aeronautical Engineering 5 years ago at the Aleppo University of Mechanical Engineering.
My aim is to become a competent computational engineer who is qualified to work for international aeronautical engineering companies. Since Germany is known as the country at the forefront of aeronautical developments, it makes perfect sense for me to pursue my master's degree in the country that has universities best equipped to handle my masters training.
After some research, Germany turned out to be the best option for my studies since it offers the best economic advantage to families and students such as me and my family. Not only does the country present a conducive atmosphere for a growing family, but it also offers an academic and employment advantage to people of specific expertise such as me. I am already looking forward to the day when I will be qualified enough to work for the German Aerospace Center (DLR)
Having enumerated my reasons for choosing to study in Germany, I want to now explain the reasons why I am applying for acceptance to your university.
I came to know about your university through the DAAD course finder. I was impressed by the practical course curriculum and coursework. Another thing that pushed me to apply at your university was that its program designed for consecutive studies that make it ideal for my situation. Studying at your multicultural university will enables me to improve my interpersonal talents. I would be learning in one of the best universities in Europe.
I believe my educational qualifications and my experience are good enough to earn me a place in the master's program at your university. With such exemplary academic performances and scores, I believe I am the right candidate for in this program. Masters studies at your university will be challenging and at the same time interesting enough to help me overcome the odds of not only studying in a foreign institution but also living in an advanced society.
Working at the world's leading aircraft manufacturer and means being part of a high-performance team where every day you will exchange ideas and expertise with colleagues from different countries and nationalities, disciplines and backgrounds.
I am looking forward to graduating from your university and then undertaking an impressive career within the German aeronautical field over the next 5 years. I am looking forward to the opportunity to help design and manufacture the most eco-efficient, state-of-the-art aircraft. I will push the boundaries of technology with pioneering developments and designs by exploring all possibilities. I look forward to working with like minded engineers who will push to achieve the same goal: to be the best that we can be. I am hopeful that I will be able to work with Airbus, Air Berlin, or Lufthansa as part of my 5 year career development plan. Hopefully I will be accepted as an intern and then move on to a regular employee position at one of those companies thanks to the excellent training I will receive from your university.
I am positive that the university aeronautical engineering masters program will be an excellent start for an ambitious career person like me
Therefore, I would be so proud and happy if I received the admission for this program.