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The University of Melbourne application
I work at the OOOO (My institution) as an engineer in the Regional X Office. Integration and Automation of Services Towards Innovation 5.0 is the direction of OOOO development by implementing Artificial Intelligence (AI), Big Data, and Internet of Things (IoT). There is an urgent need for experts in AI Big Data, and IoT to develop those technologies. I am motivated to become one of the agents of change with the competence and skill by studying Master of Engineering. This program will complete my knowledge as a Bachelor of Applied Science in achieving practical skill dan management, and increase my confidence to propose innovative ideas to my institution that will be obtained during the study.
The University of Melbourne become my first preference to study the Master of Engineering (Electrical). The University of Melbourne is not only Australia's top university for Electrical Engineering but also offers an industry-aligned curriculum. The University of Melbourne also offers attractive courses, such as the internship course. This course will provide professional work experience, opportunity to learn about workplace culture, and strengthen the employability which can be applied to my institution. In the World Meteorological Organization (WMO) structure, The Bureau of Meteorology Australia is one of the three WMO Meteorological Centers with Melbourne as its headquarter. By studying at The University of Melbourne, I can take an internship course at Bureau of Meteorology which located in Melbourne not only to learn more about networking, automation, and integration weather equipment technology but also to learn organization management and connect me to potential networks that will benefit me going forward.
In conclusion, I believe that this is the best way to learn about technology, integration, and networking of weather equipment from Australia as a Regional Meteorological Center in the Asia Pacific.