will give me an opportunity to pursue my interest in molecular biology and genetics through interdisciplinary approaches. It will allow me to interact with students and researchers with diverse educational backgrounds and interests. I look forward to enhancing my skills and knowledge through working in a research environment in the biology department.
I think you should add some specific concepts. These sentences above do not actually express any unique concept. I want you to surprise the reader with one or two unique, memorable concepts. Drop some unforgettable concepts in the reader's lap. Share some concepts from an article or book you recently have been studying. Interest the reader.
Okay, lady, let's identify the mistakes so you can correct them. Type the essay again the correct way... oh, actually I see that JahYun Kim already fixed the small errors you made.
Okay, meditate on this and try to add some excellent concepts.