Most of these people are confused about the difference between having a lot of money and being successful. Money and success are extremely different from each other. The fact that
someone earns a lot of money does not mean that he or she is successful.
We can say that thay are not successful because they do not earn a lotof money.
you had better to review it again, it makes no sense
I think Plotophyte is only talking about that sentence above. The essay does make a lot of sense even though there are mistakes.
They are successful people because their proposal is important for the humanity. They can save a lot of lives and help a lot of people to survive. We can say that they
are not successful because they do not earn a lot of
Lastly, there are other people who effectively earn a lot of money and are successful at the same time. But this success is not related to the money they earn but related to another
thing. As an example, t
he president of the country can earn a lot of ...
His success does not have a relationship
with the money that he earns but with the decisions he makes to improve his country
and help the citizens to have a good life in this country.--- excellent idea!! Good sentence.
Some people think that the people who
earn a lot of money are successful because they can buy whatever they want.
to earn ---> and ---> be
It is wonderful to earn a lot of money and be successful at the same time. However , we have to understand that earning a lot of money can not absolutely reflect success but that success
can lead in most cases to earn a lot of money.