Shadowing Physician Assistant in the ER made me realize the need for a Physician Assistantthat a Physician assistant needs to have a strong sense of empathy and good communication skills, as these enable themhim/her to gain the trust and confidence of patients
Observing procedures such as sutures on lacerations and abscesses being removed demonstrated the high level of skillskillsa Physician Assistant needneeds in order to perform such delicate procedures, and the huge responsibilityresponsibilities they must shoulder on a daily basis.
Moreover, as a member of CLUSTER (Collaboration for Leadership in Urban Science Teaching, Evaluation, and Research), which is an elite National Science Foundation sponsored pre-service teacher preparation program. As being part of CLUSTER, I have worked at the New York Hall of Science as an Explainer
you should combine 2 sentences into 1
If given the opportunity to reach higher, I would do the best of my abilitymy best to achieve my aspirations
I do not want to end up like my dad, having to notfailing to live up to his dreams because of financial problems
your writing is good with academic vocabulary. Just pay attention to subject and verb agreement more. It seems that you haven't yet given the example of how you found a career as physician assistant to be different from other health care professions