I need a letter of motivation for application for a fellowship prog.

I wish to apply for a fellowship masters programme in Environmental planning and management. My bachelors degree was in Forestry and Wildlife management which i got in 2003. I founded GMI- a non governmental organisation in 2010, to address the issues of deforestation, climate change. Our achiand create clubs in schools for environmental awareness programmes in high schools in Nigeria. i would be grateful for you timely response to serve as a guide to meet the deadline.

Change "My bachelors degree was in Forestry and Wildlife management which i got in 2003" to "I receieved my bachelors degree in Forestry and Wildlife management in the [spring/winter/fall/summer] of 2003."

Also change "I founded GMI- a non governmental organisation in 2010, to address the issues of deforestation, climate change." to "In 2010 I founded [GMI spelled out, not acronym], a non-governmental organisation to address the critical issues of deforestation and climate change."

Finally I would change "i would be grateful for you timely response to serveas a guide to meet the deadline." to "I would be grateful for a timely response to serve as a guide to meet the deadline."

Thanks!

Thanks