I would be able to interact with,
students from all around the world
Moreover, living in Berlin, which is one of the most modern,and cosmopolitan, and most beautiful cities in Europe with one of the highest standards of living, I expecthope for a chance to live and study in this city.
I have completed my secondary school certificate examination with major subjects of business like accounting, management, etc. ThenNext I have continued my higher secondary school certificate examination. Then I haveFinally I admitted myself in Bachelor of Business Administration to obtain a Bachelor degree as well as to spread my education in an excellent private university named Southeast University Bangladesh.
Here is a start to the changes that I see.
Try reading it out loud. This letter sounds as though you are talking to someone you are familiar with. It does not sound like something you would present to a business or a college.