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Resume grammar check--- internship and work experience


bonboncase 20 / 45 15  
Oct 31, 2015   #1
Hi guys. I just got a job as an oral English teacher so I am adding this experience in my resume. However, I am not sure if I am writing the sentence correctly since the sentences in resume are a bit different. Please correct me if I am wrong.

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Internship and Work Experience

xxx Education Group
Currently trained to be an oral English teacher for high school students and am expected to start teaching in January 2016

xxx Futures Co. Ltd,.
Facilitated in preparing financial data for benchmarking; forecasted and analyzed the value of public listed companies using discounted cash flow model (DCF); determined return of investments using capital asset pricing model (CAPM)

xxx Security
Promoted privately raised company bonds of small and medium enterprises; simulated stock trading using real-time market data

xxx Company
Made AR(account receivables)/AP(accounts payables) accounting entries and related finance documents filing; issued debit notes and credit notes

ScorpioLove - / 1  
Oct 31, 2015   #2
should it be"Currently trained and expected to be an oral English teacher for high school students in January 2016"? I am not a native speaker and hope to see a professional opinion here.
vangiespen - / 4,137 1449  
Nov 1, 2015   #3
Hi Shiyun, let me give you a helping hand here. Again, it will be by paragraph.

Currently trained ING to be an oral English teacher for high school students . I and am expected SCHEDULED to start teaching in January 2016
- I am assuming that you are still training to become an oral English teacher at this point. Which is why I worded it in future tense. If you have already completed the training the sentence should instead read as:

Currently trained COMPLETED TRAINING to beCOME an oral English teacher for high school students (MENTION THE TRAINING DATES) . and I am expected to start teaching in January 2016

Facilitated in preparing THE PREPARATION OF financial data for benchmarking; forecasted ING and analyzed ING the value of publicLY listed companies using THE discounted cash flow model (DCF); . ASSISTED IN determined ING THE return of investments using capital asset pricing model (CAPM)

Promoted privately raised company bonds of small and medium enterprises; simulated stock trading using real-time market data
- NO CORRECTIONS

Made GENERATED AR(account receivables)/AP(accounts payables) accounting entries and related finance documents filing; issued debit notes and credit notes

I think that these corrections ought to improve your resume :-) Good luck with your application.
OP bonboncase 20 / 45 15  
Dec 15, 2015   #4
I think that these corrections ought to improve your resume :-)

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