I have a bachelor's degree
Expand on this portion. Specifically, discuss academic accomplishments, related research work, and any other academic participation that will prove an undergraduate foundation for the masters course.
it helped put things in perspective
What other skills development programs added to the perspective ? Companies invest in employee skills development in relation to an individual's promotability. Make sure to make it an important part of your career purpose consideration.
am a social creature
Unnecessary. The SOP should focus on the academic and professional aspect. The social creature should show itself in the personal statement.
The website revealed that course content of Data Science specialization strongly emphasized on practical implementation of knowledge
I've also read up on your student associations and I plan to take part in them as well.
Do not repeat website information as these are information the remewere know about. Use a different set personal considerations instead.