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statement of purpose in petroleum engineering by petroleum engineer


fuad 1 / -  
Jun 9, 2012   #1
help me with my statement of purpose to apply for US universities... i will appreciate your help ...

My name is Fuad Hamd Al-Bayati. I am 28 years old and I was born in dyala, Iraq. In 2002 I finished the secondary school in Kirkuk, Iraq. Because my older brother works in the largest oil company in Kirkuk (NOC), He advised and encouraged me to study petroleum engineering, so I joined the petroleum engineering collage at Baghdad University and graduated in 2006 with a good score.

Since 2008 I employed with North Oil Company in Kirkuk. I work as an assistant engineer in fields division / petroleum engineering department.
I am planning to continue my academic study and I would like to pursue master degree in petroleum engineering in US. I chose this program because it is related to my background study and it's related to my profession. By pursing master degree I will be able to serve my country to develop the oil industry throughout my current position or by teaching in Iraqi universities that is one of my biggest ambitions.

A thirst for knowledge has been my driving force since an early age. I thrive on gaining more knowledge everyday and my biggest motivation is the continuous struggle to be the best among my peers - a characteristic that drove me to graduate at the top of my class. During my four years of undergraduate studies in the petroleum engineering collage at Baghdad University , I learnt basics in several core petroleum engineering subjects like well logging, drilling, oil production , Thermodynamics, Geology, Geophysics, Reservoir Simulation, enhanced oil recovery, numerical and analytical simulation and petroleum economic.

My main responsibilities at work are supervising well testing and wire line operations, Design of Well Testing programs, Interpretation of Well Test Data. Now I spent more than four years as an assistant engineer in north Oil Company and waiting to be promoted to engineer soon.

To achieve my goals, I decided to pursue MSc degree in petroleum engineering and I chose US to do so that its academic studies have reached advanced stages and that its universities are considered as outstanding universities which are well known over the world.

I believe a Masters in Petroleum Engineering will not only provide me with an in-depth knowledge of the field I have been working in for the past 4 years, but also an opportunity to gain broader understanding of the industry as a whole. I am hopeful that after completing my Master's Degree, I will rejoin the industry as a more knowledgeable professional and I can teach in the best universities in my country or abroad.
kookiePA 1 / 2  
Jun 10, 2012   #2
Here are a few suggestions!

Since 2008 I have been an employee of North Oil ...
I am planning to continue my academic study and I would like to pursue ...
I chose this program because it is related to my background study and it's related to my profession. By pursing master's degree...

I hope that helps!
ah_zafari [Contributor] 40 / 672 148  
Jun 12, 2012   #3
I am planning to further my academic studies and I would like to pursue master degree in P etroleum E ngineering in the US. I have chosen("chose" is also OK, but I think present perfect is better. Choose what u want :)) ) this program because I have a great passion for this discipline and it is related to my background study and to my profession.

The sentence is good.

I wish you luck Fuad

Ahmad


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