Electromagnetism and Quantum Mechanics
Awesome, Hector, I hope you write an essay sometime about these subjects. I am very interested in the work of Robert Becker with bioelectromagnetism, which has implications for acupuncture. Maybe that is a little different from what interests you.
Anyway, check out The Body Electric by Becker. Maybe you will like it.
This essay really is strong enough to meet high standards. Mark caught some things that I had missed, and I'm glad he saw what I did not notice.
If anything, I would say you should make the writing LESS complicated.
Like... The method of data extraction would be contingent on the phenomena of interest but both natural and man-made objects could make valid subjects. -- very complicated, but really that is okay. You are complex in your thinking.