Aunt Ina is an old and weak woman who lives alone!

PLEASE HELP ME BY CORRECTING THIS ESSAY! I NEED IT TOMORROW!!!!
ESSAY:
Aunt Ina is an old and weak woman who lives alone.

Every weekend, we will visit Aunt Ina. Mother cooks the lunch and we have a meal together.

Later, my sisters, Aunt Ina and I will play chess. In the evening, we will go to Lake Gardens. Aunt Ina likes to sit beside the lake while my sisters and I will jog around the park. On Sunday, we will return to our home.

NOTE: My English is bad so I need help at this forum. Hope someone can help me!

is it all of part of your posting?
I suggest you to arrange your idea before write it down, it can help you to develop idea when you read.

Every weekend, we will visit Aunt Ina. Mother cooks the lunch and we have a meal together.

if you want to describe something which happens regularly, I suggest you to use present simple,,don't use simple future,,

In the evening, we will go to Lake Gardens

what does it mean? don't you want to write Gardens Lake? (which means lake which has name 'gardens')

Hi...,

I think you need more sentences to express your ideas.

After reading your writing, I have a pattern to share:


... Aunt Ina, my sister and I will play chess. Then, we will... in the evening.

Every weekend we visit her.


.... is this your mother? If so;
My mother cooks lunch there and we all dine together.


... keep in present tense as this is a recurrent event.




We return home only on Sunday.


But you are quite good with grammar :)

Thank you guys! Helped me.
But please provide a full essay...


Don be so bad to me I am newbie.