I am having trouble with the things in bold and I have no clue how to fix them.Please help.
As the company reached new heights
(The company was becoming very popular so they reached a 'new height.'What is a better way to say this?
All changes were made based on how they would affect
the customer. (Affect or effect?I know, I should know this!)
Many of the employees were highly
educated and well experienced people
, such as Harvard graduates of former Wal-Mart corporate managers. (this sounds a bit odd)
Michael analyzes the likelyhood
of the compnay succeeding (likelyhood, just need a different word)
was highlighted by the media. (Better words to use)
When writing about a certain decade( 1990's) is there a problem refering to parts of the decade as the early 1990's and late 1990's? Would the 20th century sound better?
Thanks a bunch!