hannapang 1 / 1 Jul 27, 2011 #11.I like play time, but I hate nap time.2.I have four family. My mom has a beautiful smile.3. i am silly boy. I like to trick to the teachers.4.Many friends want to play with me because I am popular.5My sister is 8 years old. she goest to elementary school.6 I am happy when I meet my teachers.7. I want to go to beach with my family on summer vacation.8 I am good at counting numbers than my brother.9.I like story books. It is fun to read books to my friend like my teacher.10 I like lions. I am not afraid of lions.11My mom is beautiful and a good cook.12 I have big eyes so I can see well.13 I like running in outside playground.14. I am shy boy so I don't want to talk.
T9Fernando - / 4 Jul 28, 2011 #21.Correct.2.I have four family members.3.I am a silly boy. I like to play tricks on my teachers.4.Correct.5.She goes to an elementary school.6.Correct.7.I want to go to the beach.8.I am better9.It is funny10.Correct.11.Correct.12.Correct.13.delete "in"14.I am a shy boy
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129 Jul 31, 2011 #3reticent is a beautiful wordI agree!Great work, T9Fernando!!13 I like running in outside at the playground.14. I am shy boy, so I don't want to talk.
OP hannapang 1 / 1 Aug 10, 2011 #4please correct my grammar1. There are many different types of transportation in the world. I go to kindergarten on a schoolbus.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129 Aug 16, 2011 #5The grammar is good in this last sentence... but "school bus" is 2 words, not one word.:-)