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Weekly Routine of my friend; Present Tense


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Jan 24, 2013   #1
I need to use present tense for this essay and I really need your help to see whether there is mistake in my essay.

Weekly Routine



This is a weekly routine of my friend, Fatin Nabihah. Every Monday she goes to college and she usually wakes up at 9.45am in the morning since the class starts at 11 o'clock and even though it might be early to some of you but she really takes a lot of time to take a bath and get dressup. She usually did not take a breakfast in the morning and also skip the lunch. She only have a drink on the afternoon. She have two classes on Monday and it finish at 4 o'clock. She goes back to hostel after the class is over and take a nap or do some revision while waiting for her housemate and have a dinner with them. The next day is Tuesday, it is the same start like Monday but she wakes up more earlier than yesterday because her class start at 10 o'clock in the morning. She also did not take a breakfast and skip lunch today but she did not goes back to hostel when the class is over because on Tuesday she has three classes and she really need an energy so she goes to cafe and eat. It also is the same routine on Wednesday and Thursday but the schedule of her class does not pack like her schedule on Tuesday. On friday she wakes up at 6.45am because her class start at 8.00am and she really have a problem to wakes up since it is so early in the morning. The next day is the day she always wait eagerly to enjoy her weekoff. She wake up quite late in the morning because it is weekend day. She spend her weekend day by online, wash her clothes, goes out with her friend to eat and rest all day on Sunday.

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Jan 24, 2013   #2
This is a weekly routine of my friend, Fatin Nabihah.

This is the weekly routine of my friend, Fatin Nabihah; .... pay attention to punctuation I introduced :)

She usually did not(past tense) take a breakfast in the morning and also skips the lunch.

She usually does not take breakfast in the morning and also skips the lunch.

She only havehas a drink on the afternoon.

She only takes a drink in the afternoon.

She havehas two classes on Monday and itthey finish at 4 o'clock.

class --------> it / classes ------------> they

She goes back to hostel after the class is over and takes a nap or does some revision while waiting for her housemate and haveahas dinner with them.

She takes/ They take; She has/ They have


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