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IELTS Writing Task 2: Do you think the laws are needed to make people recycle?


ying_chen 3 / 5  
Feb 22, 2018   #1
Some People claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycles. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?


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In a modern society, more and more products are produced which are not able to be recycled. Discussion about whether the law is needed from government to enhance the amount of recycling since the individual practice is not enough. From my perspective, I agree the idea that government should involve and minimize the global warming caused by unrecycled goods.

The first reason is obvious, business creates hundred times of trashes every day compared to the individual. If we can have a law to enforce from business to household, the result would be more efficient and significant. Secondly, not only the trashes, the materials of products which business provides to customers are also related to the environment. For example, many drinks or milk shops offer plastic bags to customers for free that increase lots of wasted bags that only for one-time usage. If we implement the law to ban the free plastic bags or encouraging shops to use paper bags, it can save lots of unnecessary waste.

Even more, law can help not only individual or business but also the whole society can aware of it and improve all together. From the news on television, advertisements around the streets and educations from schools, families, business, more and more people can practice, implement the recycling as their daily routine.

In conclusion, I agree it's not enough for only the household or individual to do the recycling of wastes, adding the help from government to make it a legal requirement will definitely create a bigger impact to the world.
mohit2k6123 2 / 6  
Feb 22, 2018   #2
You have written a good essay pointing out the limitation of individual affirmative action for recycling wastage. The reasons you gave for policy support in enforcing recycling on businesses are rational.

What is left out from the essay is examples supporting your suggestions. Like you could include some examples of countries where laws formed on recycling waste have been successful. You could have given some data pre and post implementing those law to demonstrate the effect of enforcing laws on waste.

Apart from that, your essay is good to go.
gmeigo9 6 / 20 2  
Feb 23, 2018   #3
Your essay is good. To enhance it, add personal examples in which you show Recycle in your life and follow tips.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 14,767 4772  
Feb 23, 2018   #4
Chen, first up, the Task 2 essay must always have 5 paragraphs composed of an opening, 3 body paragraphs, and the conclusion. By delivering less than that number of paragraphs means you are willing to be scored down for lack of a completely developed discussion. Another reason that this essay will be scored down is because it did not properly discuss the prompt in the required format. The thesis calls for this essay to be discussed as an extent / emotional essay. You did not offer a degree of agreement such as "totally" or "completely". You offered only a simple agreement which is not what the prompt is asking for. An additional mistake in your presentation is that you discussed a personal opinion as a closing statement. The closing statement is not used to continue a discussion of the prompt. Rather, it is used to close the discussion with a wrap up of the preceding discussion. By doing this, you will further lose points considerations. Be very careful about how you discuss the essays. Learn the different discussion styles for these opinion essays. The forum is rich in examples of the various essay and discussion types for you to learn from. Use it to your advantage.


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