Hello Suranjan!
Whenever you post an essay, include the prompt.
Every person possesses that one unique characteristic that he/she can brag about.
This seemed like a really obvious observation until I saw the word "brag." That single word made me like this sentence.
Well, in my case I've got not one,
not two , but several traits that I can talk about ---- unnecessary emphasis
If you looked through a magnifying glass, the person above would be evident to you. However on closer inspection through a microscope, I'm more than just a Jack.
Hmm...I'm slightly unsure whether I like this part or not. I think it is clever of you to use that analogy, but ...
Anyway never mind :)
By debating I don't mean just formal points of information, I'd rather call it lawyering (minus the legitimate part).
I'm not sure if I got your meaning properly. What do you mean by "points of information?"
Your fourth paragraph has too many unnecessary descriptions for my liking. Condense some of that stuff. It would be better if you join it with the preceding para.
Since I don't know the prompt, I cannot comment on the suitability of this essay. Your writing seems fine.