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Prompt: Why Ohio State University
Other than the fact that I rooted for the Buckeyes during the Rose Bowl, Ohio State University has caught my attention in several unique ways. One of my favorite things about OSU is that it is located in the city of Columbus and it has one of the largest campuses in the United States; I flourish in a large diverse environment. Columbus is gorgeous at night, the streets are lined with restaurants and diners, and the landscape of the campus is breathtaking. As I walked through the streets of the OSU campus, I enjoyed the uniquely diverse student body. OSU also offers an immense numbers of clubs and volunteering opportunities to help me know that OSU wants to provide their students with a gaging activity. I learned that OSU also offers a variety of cultural experiences: Columbus Art Festival, Jazz & Ribs, Festival Latino, The Ohio State Fair, and the Dublin Irish Festival. OSU also offers a wealth of academic opportunity with a variety of programs in many fields of study, all taught by highly effective professors. Studying at OSU will help me get internships and a first hand job experience. A rich and varied student body, extremely respected academic cirriculum, and location in a great Midwestern city makes OSU an absolutely amazing and unique place to study, and I hope to attend this fall. I cannot wait to study and organize my thoughts on The Oval and chant the famous OSU chant in the Buckeye stadium. Although I may not know where my life is headed, I know for a fact that OSU's valuable resources will help me shape my life, and discover my true identity and activity and provide me with the ultimate college experience where I can learn, enjoy, and grow.
It's a great essay, simple yet descriptive. I liked it because it's a motivation to me.
Am sorry am not so well at writing essays so I don't want to get it wrong for you but from what I think it's really good and good luck with it!!!!
but you can check my essays and tell me what you think.
Talk more about the university itself, and even go into what you want to pursue, A lot of places have wonderful nightlife, restaurants and festivals, so that's not really unique, But you're off on a good start.
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